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Daijena1mthCommentedCh 489 Chapter 444- Daijena1mthReplied to MARLENE_ANGELCh 3 Louge Town
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To be fair, thos are show muscles, in a actual fight they are horrible to have.
Her muscles weren't bulging like the bodybuilders I was used to thinking as the pinnacle of strength; no, they were sinewy and compact, but way more chiseled. - Daijena1mthCommented
Mortals and repenting, ha Good joke
So, no one has had any form of noticeable blessing from Demetra in centuries, and I doubt anyone will for centuries to come... she simply let us mortals know she had grown to despise us, and that she would only return when we 'repented', though she didn't tell us how..." - Daijena2mthCommented
She immediatly went for the throat, yikes
"Kill yourselves." Emma spat out at them. - Daijena2mthReplied to Vancero
Peasant mortality rate during winter could reach as high as 30% In case of a disease also going around....being sick during winter with just a cold was basically a death sentence.
I might not have gone in depth about winter, but it's bad; I mean, cold, windy, snowy bad, in the olden days. - Daijena3mthCommented
Well, there was the maid that mentioned the wine cellar bed.
"You know, I noticed that other than a butler, there are no other people working around the Mansion? Especially no Maids. I wonder why that is?" I glared his way. - Daijena3mthReplied to Niomi"It was a relief that Sona inherited the Sitri bloodline…"
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the words of school and real friends, meanwhile 80% of friendships from school end when school and the same enforced location requirement ends
"I'm really sorry, Heather," I responded. "But pretty soon, you'll have a new life, and you'll be able to go to a school and make real friends who really will care about you." I gently rubbed her back. - Daijena3mthReplied to Niomi
No witnesses
Where a normal Gardevoir was white and green, with a red horn. Mine, however, had the white replaced with crimson, the green with black, and the horn was a liquid gold color. - Daijena3mthReplied to Sorata_Dreca
It's a spam bot account, just report it and ignore it
"It's currently snowing in my living room." - Daijena3mthReplied to Darth_Nihilus_6756
Only part of it, so mephisto will lose a abysmal small part of himself
"This world might suppress the strength of beings like myself, in higher realms, but there's always ways to get around that! Devouring the souls of the world's inhabitants is the simplest method!" Mephisto bragged as he started walking towards my group. He soon became wreathed in fire, and the ground beneath him started to boil everywhere he stepped. - Daijena3mthReplied to toonami_kurohime
A idiotic bot that doesn't even make sense
Although Ebern was barely conscious, he still somewhat heard that what he had just gone through was due to Naruto's carelessness, resulting in a single flowing down his lifeless eyes. - Daijena3mthReplied to Skyler_Jarrard
Goodb ol Mass Effect
Kat is in Kontrol - Daijena3mthReplied to hiatusy
....why do you ask
[Statistically, the Waifu trade is made up of about 97% of male Gamers.] - Daijena3mthCommented
....he didn't even do anything yet to deserve that.
…Exploded! - Daijena3mthCommented
*Looks at Medusa and Arachne*. Yes very 'gentle'
The two War Gods of the Greeks were asymmetric/ mirrors/night and day/on different ends of the spectrum of each other. Area had vicious Greek Armor with lots of pointy bits and glowing red eyes. Athena on the other hand, while still looking militaristic, had a certain decorum about her with a well kept 'uniform' and a stern but gentle nature. - Daijena3mthPosted
I am....very conflicted. Let's start it up with a positive, it's a good story, but for the negative...it's not a naruto fanfic, not really, will elaborate later. The gimick of Sakura is also...not real/kinda pointless? And worst of all, the real mc is....a bit of a Merry Sue, he does a lot of impossible stuff with a lot of hard effort yes...but he doesn't really fail?This entire story feels like a disconnect with what lured me into it. Without spoiling I'd advice to stop reading here. The reincarnation with a war veteran sakura because he saved a goddess without knowing and then punished for it, and then another goddess said she will fix it, but doesn't. So the story just takes care of it a different way which basically just results in them being....weird siblings/strangers?Then the author pulls some big questions for the entire world building of naruto, that sure are interesting but....resolves them in such a way that it doesn't feel the same anymore. One could argue that it's expanding the source material into their own thing. But....it also doesn't feel like that to me. It's...to thoughtful and planned out without substance? Not in action but....a dream, things happen but it doesn't feel right. None of it feels like it's possible for a down to earth person, only by a being that is attempting to act like one.Maybe it's bias, because I don't like the way many things are done while still liking the storyBut I advice for fans of Naruto to avoid this as it's more for people that want a more elaborate story. Oh yeah, and genderbender fans are wrong here as well.
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...that would be dissapointing on so many levels, also, I doubt he can make anything that could outperform ninjas. He isn't sci-fi jesus with a how to guide for every invention of humanity, also, what does a gun or a tank do for you against stuff like Susano? I dislike people being obsessed with technology in fantastical worlds. It clashes with the world building, would take a unreasonable amount of effort to come even close, and honestly? Would feel very much like a plot thingy that is far to unrealistic.
"Hehe, secret! I'm sure I'll explain it to you in the future when I have something more presentable but until then wait for it! I'm sure you'll love it though, most people should. If it is developed properly other things using it could be built which would make ninja's useless after all."