i feel like ive lost brain cells trying to read this it also felt more like a guide line then a story and feels like a lot of words are missing

World background: Naruto Character design: Pretty much the cover, black eyes, black, hair. Now the Mc is pretty naive, hes doesnt exactly safe everyone but he is pretty much typical shonen main charcter. The other characters are alright, not too different but not exactly. Danzo is not dumb, but the novel makes him seem dumb. The way mikoto and Kushina was written is plain and needs more work, honeslty in general the women in naruto are conplety terrible so it kinda fits. Now the Main Character is pretty much a child who knows the future, he is dense, tells his secrects in combat, really is simple minded. The way to fix this is to add more complexty, give more goals other than protect and grow stronger.

WQ: To be honest, it's better than a lot of works here (which isn't necessarily good), and in the relaxed reading I did, I didn't notice mistakes or anything that bothered me. US: very good. SD: You know, the usual. Nothing to comment. CD: good too. WB: well it's Naruto. And Naruto's WB isn't the best (far from the best) but who cares? Personal evaluation: "rise to the top" gives an idea of ​​ascension, which we don't see when in the first chapter the protagonist gets 5 wishes, which, speaking of them, is the same as always. Powers that defy the power scale of the piece (since it's Naruto, it doesn't matter, the entire anime is broken in this regard), talents, etc. But again, who cares? I recommend reading, it's a lot of fun.

Now I am gonna be honest he gets 5 wishes which is fine but wishes for dumb stuff and he a dude who only spent 1 year with his dad and half of that was with his dad on missions who died and the mc did not 'expect' it in Naruto He has wishes that are considered OP in Naruto but all 5 wishes could have been better especially the last one Tbh this is just dumb and I quit at chapter 2 but overall better then most just Mc is dumb I am just giving this review based on my opinion

Nice story (Don't dropped). Good novel. .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................

-good idea, sub par execution -writing quality is 6/10 you just need to find a way to connect your wording -background story pretty average stuff mc dies reincarnated gets wishes you know the deal -if you can get over grammar mistakes then you will probably like this one good luck author

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Heyyyo~ are you calling me? hwhehwheh btw nice book[img=recommend] ...................................................................................................................... ............. ............ .................... .................... .