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Kagethewriter
KagethewriterLv23yr
2021-09-27 12:15

Now I am gonna be honest he gets 5 wishes which is fine but wishes for dumb stuff and he a dude who only spent 1 year with his dad and half of that was with his dad on missions who died and the mc did not 'expect' it in Naruto He has wishes that are considered OP in Naruto but all 5 wishes could have been better especially the last one Tbh this is just dumb and I quit at chapter 2 but overall better then most just Mc is dumb I am just giving this review based on my opinion

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Kagethewriter
KagethewriterLv2

Also he gets beaten by Minato at the same age without training and with all his buffs he still lost

Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

so is this not worth reading?

Kagethewriter
KagethewriterLv2

Eh depends on you but personally i would wish for more powerful surff to be simple Mc is dumb from what i read

Kagethewriter
KagethewriterLv2

Dependa on whta you like but mc is dimb

Zzz_808:so is this not worth reading?
Kagethewriter
KagethewriterLv2

Dumb

Zzz_808:so is this not worth reading?
Jorlat123
Jorlat123Lv14

You only read 2 chapters and you already determined that MC is dumb? LOL. TBH, not sure who is the dumb one here XD

Kagethewriter
KagethewriterLv2

You cann tell the mc is dumb from the wishes lol and the way he acts It aint like i have to read 50 chapters to figure out if he is dumb or not lol

Jorlat123:You only read 2 chapters and you already determined that MC is dumb? LOL. TBH, not sure who is the dumb one here XD
Kagethewriter
KagethewriterLv2

Plus opinion So i can say i think your dumb also

Jorlat123:You only read 2 chapters and you already determined that MC is dumb? LOL. TBH, not sure who is the dumb one here XD
Kagethewriter
KagethewriterLv2

XDLOL I really can’t tell whcih of us is the dumbest LOL you only need to read 2 chapters to tell the mc is dumb LOL I really can’t tell which of the two Is dumber you or the mc XD (Bro whoe writes like this?)

Jorlat123:You only read 2 chapters and you already determined that MC is dumb? LOL. TBH, not sure who is the dumb one here XD
Jorlat123
Jorlat123Lv14

Yeah dude, you sure is smart. You only need 2 chapters to know where the story goes and know how MC character will develop. Very admirable. LOL

Kagethewriter:You cann tell the mc is dumb from the wishes lol and the way he acts It aint like i have to read 50 chapters to figure out if he is dumb or not lol
Kagethewriter
KagethewriterLv2

usually fanfica have no development and i can tell your a troll so i am Just gonna stop wasting my time bye dear supid troll

Jorlat123:Yeah dude, you sure is smart. You only need 2 chapters to know where the story goes and know how MC character will develop. Very admirable. LOL
KING_IN_YELLOW
KING_IN_YELLOWLv5

ive read it and i can say i regret it

Jorlat123:Yeah dude, you sure is smart. You only need 2 chapters to know where the story goes and know how MC character will develop. Very admirable. LOL
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