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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv53yr
2021-09-16 14:35

Only problem that I have with this novel - is mc. He doesn't have solid character and switches very easily under circumstances. Like yes, he is prideful. Then he just let slip a lot of things and words from...you could probably guess who. I could only say, that is harem novel. For sure. It's not at the point when I want to bash author head in bloody mush and enjoy his suffering... Maybe a little. But it's so funny when you read just a paragraph above how smart, disciplined and prideful mc, only to see nothing like this. And yeah, another point, honestly I don't enjoy atg world. Mc already strong and nothing interesting happened so far. Not quite, I mean a lot of interesting things happened, but nothing actually finalized. Like relationships with girls, it's started, but because author want to get them more alive mc just waiting and doing nothing to them - yes, that's exactly why people read harem novels. To let girls Rot somewhere else and take some cheap fastfood in between...what?!

Fallen God System (dropped)

Dark_Crown98
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That's for a Review.!! Actually it is not that MC personality is changing... I just want reader to feel, Why did his personality changed!! So when the stories go, There you will also know reason for MC personality changes.. As for women... There will be many, who MC will use only as S.Slaves.. and like that . But the main Harem girls, I will try to give them a unique personality.. As I am New Author, So I can't keep everything in check.

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Well, I guess his character changed...before he whould just massacre everyone and now...he is just being there and trolling people? Honestly I don't know what exactly he is doing in latest chapters. Especially with girls, like they just mind they own business while he sitting in sword villa? Not sure.

Dark_Crown98:That's for a Review.!! Actually it is not that MC personality is changing... I just want reader to feel, Why did his personality changed!! So when the stories go, There you will also know reason for MC personality changes.. As for women... There will be many, who MC will use only as S.Slaves.. and like that . But the main Harem girls, I will try to give them a unique personality.. As I am New Author, So I can't keep everything in check.
3yr
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Dark_Crown98
Dark_Crown98Author

Just Your everyday normal Shameless author.. I know I don't deserve 5 star... but if I don't love my own work, Who will?☺️ So tolerate my Shameless... And if you have any question you could comment....

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LawWillOblivionK
LawWillOblivionKLv13

The mc is ruthless to himself as well as his enemies.I especially like what the mc did to SCUM CHE.A very good job author.More chapters are needed

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_oinkchan
_oinkchanLv5

Need moarrrrrrr ...... ..... The first thing I did was to be a part of the world and the other is a great way to get the best out of

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Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

actually your story is decent but your update rate is pretty tough, and your character development is sickly and the jumps in events for no reason are annoying. so I recommend you to read this for your reference

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I liked it, [img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать]

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good

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