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Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv33yr
2021-09-16 20:07

actually your story is decent but your update rate is pretty tough, and your character development is sickly and the jumps in events for no reason are annoying. so I recommend you to read this for your reference

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Dark_Crown98
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dude, I don't know that language...

Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

use spanish translation into your language

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LawWillOblivionK
LawWillOblivionKLv13

It is a good one.

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