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Lucy_Carla
Lucy_CarlaLv42yrLucy_Carla

1.personally i dont like natasha as (candidate) heroine, 2. i dont like a jerk system (give prank, etc) 3. punishment part make it like a slave system ..........,...................................................,...................................................,........................................

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Alcoholic_Panda
Alcoholic_PandaAuthorAlcoholic_Panda

everyone is free to have their own opinion, i did say this is my first fic, and that there will be mistakes

MajesterSmith
MajesterSmithLv4MajesterSmith

Unwept_Writer
Unwept_WriterLv5Unwept_Writer

You are fine Just keep writing what you want i love the book

Alcoholic_Panda:everyone is free to have their own opinion, i did say this is my first fic, and that there will be mistakes
WebReaderPub
WebReaderPubLv14WebReaderPub

system without punishment part are too broken, thought task should be the product of Mc choice. this is my opinio of what a system novel should be

Lucy_Carla
Lucy_CarlaLv4Lucy_Carla

not really... for exmpl : 1. make reward less valuable, 2. dont do it often, 3. give some task time limit, if mc cannot completed task, he already waste time and efford, 4. most online game give task/quest without punishment but that doesnt make player broken, why ?. there so many way for make it not too broken...

WebReaderPub:system without punishment part are too broken, thought task should be the product of Mc choice. this is my opinio of what a system novel should be
KingParadox
KingParadoxLv1KingParadox

I agree that a system needs punishment commensurate with the reward but it has to have the option to accept or reject the mission otherwise you are just a slave.

WebReaderPub:system without punishment part are too broken, thought task should be the product of Mc choice. this is my opinio of what a system novel should be
newthings
newthingsLv6newthings

natasha is overused and boring, so much that have to see the movies once again to see here real character lol

ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14ProfessorofCulture

harem?

Alcoholic_Panda:everyone is free to have their own opinion, i did say this is my first fic, and that there will be mistakes
Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv5Insane_Pumpkin

Well sad for you the system dosen't actually have punishments, it was a trick of the managment to ship MC and Natasha.

KingParadox:I agree that a system needs punishment commensurate with the reward but it has to have the option to accept or reject the mission otherwise you are just a slave.
Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv5Insane_Pumpkin

Well the system dosen't actually have punishments, it was a trick of the managment to ship MC and Natasha.

WebReaderPub:system without punishment part are too broken, thought task should be the product of Mc choice. this is my opinio of what a system novel should be
Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv5Insane_Pumpkin

1. Is a preference. 2. It was obvious the moment the managment (behind the scenes) appeared that it will be this kind of system. 3. The system dosen't actually have punishments, it was a trick of the managment to ship MC and Natasha.

Lucy_Carla
Lucy_CarlaLv4Lucy_Carla

1. there reason for that, few reason: she no longer "black widow" if she decide settle in relationship, i dont think "housewife" job will make her "spy agent" job easier. etc 2. then i dont like the managment (behind scene), if you like, go ahead, but i think mc not become system plaything is better. 3. so that punishment is not Real ? a Fake ? or it just another Prank ? why dont we let Mc reject it or deliberate fail it and see if that punishment is real or not ?

Insane_Pumpkin:1. Is a preference. 2. It was obvious the moment the managment (behind the scenes) appeared that it will be this kind of system. 3. The system dosen't actually have punishments, it was a trick of the managment to ship MC and Natasha.
Star_Dust_5798
Star_Dust_5798Lv3Star_Dust_5798

arekuruutento
arekuruutentoLv4arekuruutento

so is I harem?, or just Natasha, I'm trying to read but can't, cuz I don't know if it's harem or not.

Lucy_Carla:1. there reason for that, few reason: she no longer "black widow" if she decide settle in relationship, i dont think "housewife" job will make her "spy agent" job easier. etc 2. then i dont like the managment (behind scene), if you like, go ahead, but i think mc not become system plaything is better. 3. so that punishment is not Real ? a Fake ? or it just another Prank ? why dont we let Mc reject it or deliberate fail it and see if that punishment is real or not ?
Bad_news
Bad_newsLv1Bad_news

Natascha best agent

Alcoholic_Panda:everyone is free to have their own opinion, i did say this is my first fic, and that there will be mistakes
Darwin111111
Darwin111111Lv4Darwin111111

And the MC knows? No. That's why it doesn't matter if there would be no punishment. It's like not paying for a kidnapped family member because you think there was no punishment... just that it's your life instead of someone else's

Insane_Pumpkin:Well the system dosen't actually have punishments, it was a trick of the managment to ship MC and Natasha.