Disapointed in world i hide here to drown myself in fantasy.
I only write this as a request, please edit this story so it can be redable, because this mess with giant blooks of text are not enjoyable to read at all... Idk about the story though so good luck for anyone willing to dig through that.
The idea is great, background information is lacking to say the least, chapters are chaotic and i though that chapters are missing in some places... Also i only got to chapter 40 so can you someone tell me if he ever comes back home and see his maid dead?
That's great it's getting more interesting but does grammar also immprove? Cause im on 2nd chapter and it's a tragedy...
What canon... author can ignore it all the way by not going to earth. Though his curent planet is interesting, i wonder in what time period he is plot wise.
Very interesting fanfiction, i read 180+ ch and in 99.9% fanfictions if the timeline would move so slow i would be bored out of my mind or chooked by too much information, but you wrote it in a way where i enjoyed it and i wait for more. Good luck author and great work.
Omfg first learn how to write, then learn how to read, or you can do it the other way idc. If you bothered to read it with both eyes open you would see i wrote about Hajime that came back in time so he would be from the future and would be past the first dungeon and know about the effect of monster meat.
So you want a a Hajime that comes back in time and gets alchemy skill as additional bonus at the start...? Also how tf would MC know about monsters meat properites, at the same time if you had half a brain you would be able to see that with current story development he will (in my opinion) create a serum that will make him a vampire like yue which would give him the same racial skills and delete the need of monster meat. At the same time this course of action suits him much more as a crazy alchemist.