I feel like to is gonna point a tragedy on her back by going there. Also im waiting for MC to steal Coulsons car.

I only write this as a request, please edit this story so it can be redable, because this mess with giant blooks of text are not enjoyable to read at all... Idk about the story though so good luck for anyone willing to dig through that.

The idea is great, background information is lacking to say the least, chapters are chaotic and i though that chapters are missing in some places... Also i only got to chapter 40 so can you someone tell me if he ever comes back home and see his maid dead?

Ik i also read them if it's not too bad but you won't are this getting better. IT will stay like that...

Im waiting for him to steal the time stone. Never liked Ancient One she sometimes gaves the arogant vibe of the time keepers...

That's great it's getting more interesting but does grammar also immprove? Cause im on 2nd chapter and it's a tragedy...

That would be if he was a mortal... campoione was a title for a mortal that did the immposible, why would he get such a perk for killing a god that was weaker then him???

What canon... author can ignore it all the way by not going to earth. Though his curent planet is interesting, i wonder in what time period he is plot wise.

I feel your pain...

Waiting for more.

Great chapter, waiting for more.

Good luck and waiting for more

Thanks for the chapter.

Very interesting fanfiction, i read 180+ ch and in 99.9% fanfictions if the timeline would move so slow i would be bored out of my mind or chooked by too much information, but you wrote it in a way where i enjoyed it and i wait for more. Good luck author and great work.

Omfg first learn how to write, then learn how to read, or you can do it the other way idc. If you bothered to read it with both eyes open you would see i wrote about Hajime that came back in time so he would be from the future and would be past the first dungeon and know about the effect of monster meat.

Hmmm about that soup. Is the regeneration boost adding 100% of his basic regen or overall regen?

So you want a a Hajime that comes back in time and gets alchemy skill as additional bonus at the start...? Also how tf would MC know about monsters meat properites, at the same time if you had half a brain you would be able to see that with current story development he will (in my opinion) create a serum that will make him a vampire like yue which would give him the same racial skills and delete the need of monster meat. At the same time this course of action suits him much more as a crazy alchemist.

I have a feeling that was a fertility spell or something similar instead of protection...

I bed dubles seeing MC return will go " Oh no he was corupted by dark magic" and attpempt to kill him or contain him in some way...

Well any half baked vampire could make an army by biting everyone in a small town, managment, loyalty and their personal strengh is ehat actually matters here.