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Review Detail of Kkira in Reborn to become a heavenly serpent.

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Kkira
KkiraLv142yrKkira

To be honest. The story is pretty good and well written. But the side storys, in which side characters are introduced are way to long. Tbh it feels like there are less chapters about the mc then there are about side characters. And even if the focus shifts back to the mc its not rly relevant or a major part of the story. Last time he just ate/consumed some rocks and talked with a weird lazy silver guy. And the impact these side characters at the end have arent nearly worth the chapters it took to introduce them and flesh out there personality. (at least the last time) The last "antagonist" (the dude with the weird item) just randomly got eaten by the mc after his plotarmor broke. It just feels stretched and unaccessary. Anyway i hope this isnt the case with this New bad guy and i hope that there will be more focus on the actual mc of the story. Currently at chapter 49 Hope you have a great day. Bye

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Reborn to become a heavenly serpent.

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thank you for the kind review... Yes, some of the side characters are a bit stretched.. and I'm so sorry for that. Thank you for reading though đŸ’ȘđŸ’Ș