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Kkira10mthCommentedYuck
It was because he was a citizen of Hua Nation!- Kkira11mthCommented
Yuck
It was because he was from Hua Nation! - Kkira1yrPosted
Love the story so far. And I am also really impressed, how long the chapters are. There some typos here and there but overall really well written. I rly hope the author can keep up the good work and continue on writing this novel. It is one of the few novels on this app I always look forward to read.
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Then, he would collect a few different guns and play with a clean woman. Even if the person in front of him was a woman, he didn't like just any Tom, Dick or Harry. - Kkira1yrCommented
There's a harem.𤨠How is that supposed to work if the MC already has his "perfect match"? Wouldn't that make the others feel inferior? And in my opinion a harem doesn't rly fit in your story if the MC has to be always bonded with Natasha. Idk maybe it's just cause I don't rly like harems but for me that's a real bummer. Anyway that's just my opinion.
and can you guys recommend some villains of marvel for me to put in my story. by the way, I will probably bring Felicia Hardy, a.k.a black cat into the story as well! and of course into the harem, cause why wouldn't I?! - Kkira1yrCommented
Exactly my opinion. That's why I'm so hyped about your story. Keep up the good work[img=update]
and so I dropped it and I'm back! nice having you again, and hope we get along. - Kkira1yrCommentedCh 8 Fate Weaver: Chapter 8 - Collision course
- Kkira2yrCommentedCh 94 Chapter 94(the great lord!, celestial two-headed deviant world corroded serpent)
- Kkira2yrCommentedCh 1 "Life... feels like sh*t!"
- Kkira2yrCommented
I'm pretty confused here. So he is currently talking to a Ray from another timeline. But why would they try to kill euch other or harm each other in any way. Aren't they the same person in the end. What benefit would they get from killing each other. I don't rly get it.
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No.
1.Harem? No, begone thot! - Kkira2yrPosted
To be honest. The story is pretty good and well written. But the side storys, in which side characters are introduced are way to long. Tbh it feels like there are less chapters about the mc then there are about side characters. And even if the focus shifts back to the mc its not rly relevant or a major part of the story. Last time he just ate/consumed some rocks and talked with a weird lazy silver guy. And the impact these side characters at the end have arent nearly worth the chapters it took to introduce them and flesh out there personality. (at least the last time) The last "antagonist" (the dude with the weird item) just randomly got eaten by the mc after his plotarmor broke. It just feels stretched and unaccessary. Anyway i hope this isnt the case with this New bad guy and i hope that there will be more focus on the actual mc of the story. Currently at chapter 49 Hope you have a great day. Bye
- Kkira2yrCommented
Dont you need Papers for that? So they can register you as the owner of the car?
"I'm gonna have some fun," I chuckled, getting inside my new car, oh yeah, I bought a car after I ditched the other one in a really, really, really abandoned area. - Kkira2yrCommented
Didnt he already get one? In chapter 2 in the first library before he got captured by hydra. Smth with hippos and fronting google maps, if i remember correctly.
If that were to be the case, getting a map would be essential, because in those games the only way to find the entrance to a dungeon was through the map. I mean, either way I needed to complete the map in my system, I only had a very small part 'discovered' so regardless of the dungeon system, a map was my top priority, but not any map, a world one. - Kkira2yrCommented
Edge of tomorrow?
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All right gonna drop it right here
These small fish were no match for Chu Ze. In just ten minutes, Chu Ze was the only fish left in the fish tank. - Kkira2yrReplied to i0r7t6k
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The mysterious meditation technique was a secret technique to help people strengthen their spiritual structures. It could also help people how to repair their spiritual structures!