I will stop here because I can see this is not for me. I come here expecting a kingdom building one piece fanfic but mc time is wasted in adventure and exploring and not growing his kingdom. really a king that dont rule his kingdom ? what a trash kingdom building fic. I love boa Hancock but how much mc is being a simp for her is ridiculous. he easily tell her one of the most profitable secrets of one piece(kill a devil fruit user nest to many fruits ) with a simple promise of her, he dont even know he real personality(she act like a submissive thot with luffy, it's extremely creepy. and she is more than 10 years older than him) so him expecting her to fallow in her promise is simple author forcing the plot
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Fair enough I guess, although you did get a few points incorrect, yes people don't like that Hancock thing that much its a regular complaint so in that sense thanks for this review cause people can see it and not complain about it when they finally reach that chapter. On the other hand the Kingdom building comes a bit later and frankly speaking the adventuring at least in my opinion made sense but of course its a matter of opinion. The age difference between the Mc and Hancock is 3 years, and I am gonna be real, I don't know where you got "simping" from. Also you lot put wayyyy too much importance on the devil fruit secret sure its valuable but its clear as day that those at the top of the world all know about it considering Caesar knew about it, meaning Doflamingo probably knew about it, meaning by extension Kaido probably knew about it, meaning that in general its a valuable piece of information but not as secret as y'all believe. Now onto another point, giving it to Hancock, sure you can disagree but Arch didn't have anything to give at the time and frankly speaking that piece of information doesn't put Arch is a disadvantageous position. What's she gonna do, kill the devil fruit users of Tigria? Hancock firstly just turns people to stone she finds on the calm belt to steal their supplies and apart from that Arch is just as strong as her, besides that Hancock herself would probably not give the Kuja devil fruits because of her circumstances so again as I've said multiple times in her eyes they're probably not as valuable. Now ya you could argue why didn't Hancock betray Arch but I take creative liberties with that, over all though I hope I got my point across, its too bad you didn't enjoy the novel and good luck finding one you do.
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