Welp, didn't think my grammar and english in general was that bad I guess I have to reread for mistakes a bit. Ya characters have never been my strong suit, but I am a bit confused how my plot is generic at least for a One Piece fanfic novel? But anyway, thank you for the review.

mike uses it but dint realize what it actually means

I explain a bit what I mean. Making MC a OP royalty was good, but the execution is mediocre and plot movement details are very generic. Who will teach the haki? Ofc your trusty Boa Hancock. Like any other FF can't live without her. No "old mysterious ossan with a story" or something unique or original for you. Why Mera-mera and not your own original fruit? Because Ace is popular I suppose. Why "fruit chooses his master"? Because chinese novels do it like that. No ancient mechanism, no riddle puzzle, not making up anything of that. BTW I'm pretty sure, that "intelligence" of the fruit won't manifest in any way later in the story. And so on and so forth. OP for me is a great world - because it is about adventure, venture into the unknown and amalgamation of everything under that category. Unknown treasures, new lands, new people, races, animals. And all you do is putting already known things and characters into your FF. Yeah, it is expected from the FAN fiction, but at some point it is becoming irritating - I am starting to feel, that OP world is having a size of your average neighborhood and you can't move around without bumping into people you know. I can't believe in the worldbuilding like that. Oh, and btw, do you really think that if the fruit reincarnaition is really easy - to the nearest fruit - OP world residents wouldn't be able to notice this fact over hundreds of years? Maybe you already abandoned that idea, but just bare theory itself sounds ridiculous to me.

Okay you can argue that my execution and plot development was bad or not to your liking I won't argue with that, but a few things. Firstly you still haven't clarified how my grammar and or overall writing quality is bad at least compared to other fanfictions. The Hancock bit ya you can call it unoriginal but I find plot devicing in whatever an "old mysterious" ossan is is just not my thing frankly, naturally a One Piece fanfiction is going to have One Piece characters. Apart from that, apart from what? Hancock, and Shimotsuki Village my characters have legit not encountered anyone of real plot importance by accident. Your Mera Mera point is invalid since Sixis island did actually have the fruit there its a literal fact, in fact I am surprised you aren't praising my original treasure I placed there since you seem to have wanted more original things. Overall my point being, you can have your opinion and your review, but some of your inferences are simply, wrong or contradictory. Aka, as far as I know Lawless doesn't exist in One Piece therefore original, Tigria is my original creation and all the villains so far bar from Hancock have been my own creations, therefore I am surprised your review is saying mine follows One Piece too much considering I haven't been using much characters from One Piece besides here and there. I'll give you that maybe my execution isn't the greatest and its extremely slow, or the fruit choosing thing is a bit stupid sure, but please be a bit more clear when making a review and searching up the actual facts in some instances.

Oh ya, also I forgot, the fruit reincarnation thing, ya a lot of people like to debate that point. Listen here, do you have evidence that proves against it? No, apart from your inferences, while there is literal showings in the manga and anime of fruit reincarnation taking place relatively close. Also how do you think the Marines have so many devil fruit users? How can Blackbeard hunt devil fruits? Does he have some science mumbo jumbo? If so why didn't Caesar who's a relatively smart man use it too instead of just placing some apples in a cart? Maybe because, the fruits actually reincarnate into the closest fruit of the same type? I don't know just some speculation. Sure I may be wrong and you may be completely right, but with the current information in my opinion, and this is my fanfic they reincarnate into the closest fruit of the same type.