Futility

Welp too bad, anyway thank you for your in put, if you'd like to tell where I contradicted myself I'd greatly appreciate it, besides that enjoy your day.

Yo these look amazing, is it alright if I use them?

Fair point.

Oh ya, also I forgot, the fruit reincarnation thing, ya a lot of people like to debate that point. Listen here, do you have evidence that proves against it? No, apart from your inferences, while there is literal showings in the manga and anime of fruit reincarnation taking place relatively close. Also how do you think the Marines have so many devil fruit users? How can Blackbeard hunt devil fruits? Does he have some science mumbo jumbo? If so why didn't Caesar who's a relatively smart man use it too instead of just placing some apples in a cart? Maybe because, the fruits actually reincarnate into the closest fruit of the same type? I don't know just some speculation. Sure I may be wrong and you may be completely right, but with the current information in my opinion, and this is my fanfic they reincarnate into the closest fruit of the same type.

Okay you can argue that my execution and plot development was bad or not to your liking I won't argue with that, but a few things. Firstly you still haven't clarified how my grammar and or overall writing quality is bad at least compared to other fanfictions. The Hancock bit ya you can call it unoriginal but I find plot devicing in whatever an "old mysterious" ossan is is just not my thing frankly, naturally a One Piece fanfiction is going to have One Piece characters. Apart from that, apart from what? Hancock, and Shimotsuki Village my characters have legit not encountered anyone of real plot importance by accident. Your Mera Mera point is invalid since Sixis island did actually have the fruit there its a literal fact, in fact I am surprised you aren't praising my original treasure I placed there since you seem to have wanted more original things. Overall my point being, you can have your opinion and your review, but some of your inferences are simply, wrong or contradictory. Aka, as far as I know Lawless doesn't exist in One Piece therefore original, Tigria is my original creation and all the villains so far bar from Hancock have been my own creations, therefore I am surprised your review is saying mine follows One Piece too much considering I haven't been using much characters from One Piece besides here and there. I'll give you that maybe my execution isn't the greatest and its extremely slow, or the fruit choosing thing is a bit stupid sure, but please be a bit more clear when making a review and searching up the actual facts in some instances.

Lets go first comment.

I shall claim 2nd comment of this masterpiece.

I pronounce it Ark but if you prefer Arch you can pronounce at as such, it doesn't really matter at the end of the day.

Ya I've lost a bit of direction to be honest, there isn't really anyone I can put as an opponent without absolutely wrecking Arch, or having Arch absolutely wrecking them and with the timeline as it is its a bit tough, I think I might start adding more original things, such as characters opposing factions to make things more exciting, thank you for your input.

Ngl I didn't even think of the voice of all things when making up the fruit, but you're right they do seem to share a lot of similarities.