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Slayer104Author3yr
2021-08-17 07:29

Shamelessly reviewing my own work, just because I am allowed to do that. Rest is gibberish....... ............. .............. ........

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Shadow_devil360Lv3

Now what will be the update schedule?

Slayer104Author

5 per week. Updated it in the latest chapter.

Shadow_devil360:Now what will be the update schedule?
XxTruck_KunxXLv4

Will you ever stop with the rick and ryu stuff it makes it confusing if hes using two names

RealMainCharacterLv14

I want to ask author. Do Amelia and others be exclusive his?

Slayer104Author

Amelia: in time she will be exclusive but not right now. Others: Kira and Sophia will be strictly exclusive. Rest might also be like that only but there won't be a strict condition from the MC for them to not engage with other men. All this exclusive business is an evolving thing, even I don't know what the future will hold.

RealMainCharacter:I want to ask author. Do Amelia and others be exclusive his?
RealMainCharacterLv14

what about like his sisters? (sorry i only read like a few chapter)

Slayer104:Amelia: in time she will be exclusive but not right now. Others: Kira and Sophia will be strictly exclusive. Rest might also be like that only but there won't be a strict condition from the MC for them to not engage with other men. All this exclusive business is an evolving thing, even I don't know what the future will hold.
RealMainCharacterLv14

or other major close female characters

RealMainCharacter:what about like his sisters? (sorry i only read like a few chapter)
Slayer104Author

Little one will be completely exclusive and elder one turns into one around 270 chaps in.

RealMainCharacter:what about like his sisters? (sorry i only read like a few chapter)
CJSB_2005Lv4

I have read about 60 chapter already. One thing I will say that can help the story is to split up the paragraphs to make it easier to read and digest. Because of how long the paragraph are it makes it less enjoyable to read. It feel like I am reading “a wall” and if I stop reading for a few seconds or have to do something else real quick, it makes it hard to find where I left off and I sometimes have to read the whole paragraph again. This is just my own personal opinion/preference, but I think if you make that change it could help improve the story.

Slayer104Author

Thanks for highlighting it. Actually the first 100 chaps will need a complete overhauling from my side. That was the time when I had just began my writting journey. Will rewrite it probably once I get some free time. Maybe after this first volume ends. Kudos!!

CJSB_2005:I have read about 60 chapter already. One thing I will say that can help the story is to split up the paragraphs to make it easier to read and digest. Because of how long the paragraph are it makes it less enjoyable to read. It feel like I am reading “a wall” and if I stop reading for a few seconds or have to do something else real quick, it makes it hard to find where I left off and I sometimes have to read the whole paragraph again. This is just my own personal opinion/preference, but I think if you make that change it could help improve the story.
CJSB_2005Lv4

One more thing use apostrophes (‘‘) for inner monologues and use quotation marks (“”) when a character is talking. You use apostrophes for both and it is sometimes hard to know whether they are talking to someone or if they are having an inner monologue.

Slayer104:Thanks for highlighting it. Actually the first 100 chaps will need a complete overhauling from my side. That was the time when I had just began my writting journey. Will rewrite it probably once I get some free time. Maybe after this first volume ends. Kudos!!
Slayer104Author

It's taken care of after 100 chaps

CJSB_2005:One more thing use apostrophes (‘‘) for inner monologues and use quotation marks (“”) when a character is talking. You use apostrophes for both and it is sometimes hard to know whether they are talking to someone or if they are having an inner monologue.
LandsraadLv5

I jsut want to say, well played on your work. It takes a solid heart to write a novel that clashes with the common masses' ideologies. The Suna ra..pe chapters was a very grand example of maturity. Where others are blinded by their own perspectives and can't see the underlying realty of the situation. I gave this 5 stars review for the breadth of mind.

Slayer104Author

Correction. There was a situation that developed like that. But a hero saved the day.

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Eclipse_Gate12Lv5

When will you start updating

Slayer104:Correction. There was a situation that developed like that. But a hero saved the day.
DirtyBean_UnhappyLv4

Guy who is younger than 17 but older than 15, when will you start studying?

Eclipse_Gate12:When will you start updating
Fairuz_RobbaniLv10

is there still an update for this novel?

D3ath09Lv14

dude can i join your discord? your invitation link is expired already 🥺

Mario_1359Lv15

mister , will you resume posting new chapters ? a lot of people are waiting let the story continue please

enzo456Lv4

fking cuck

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