webnovel
Slayer104
Slayer104Author3yr
2021-08-17 07:29

Shamelessly reviewing my own work, just because I am allowed to do that. Rest is gibberish....... ............. .............. ........

Liked by 10 people

LIKE
Replies21
Shadow_devil360
Shadow_devil360Lv3

Now what will be the update schedule?

Slayer104
Slayer104Author

5 per week. Updated it in the latest chapter.

Shadow_devil360:Now what will be the update schedule?
XxTruck_KunxX
XxTruck_KunxXLv4

Will you ever stop with the rick and ryu stuff it makes it confusing if hes using two names

RealMainCharacter
RealMainCharacterLv14

I want to ask author. Do Amelia and others be exclusive his?

Slayer104
Slayer104Author

Amelia: in time she will be exclusive but not right now. Others: Kira and Sophia will be strictly exclusive. Rest might also be like that only but there won't be a strict condition from the MC for them to not engage with other men. All this exclusive business is an evolving thing, even I don't know what the future will hold.

RealMainCharacter:I want to ask author. Do Amelia and others be exclusive his?
RealMainCharacter
RealMainCharacterLv14

what about like his sisters? (sorry i only read like a few chapter)

Slayer104:Amelia: in time she will be exclusive but not right now. Others: Kira and Sophia will be strictly exclusive. Rest might also be like that only but there won't be a strict condition from the MC for them to not engage with other men. All this exclusive business is an evolving thing, even I don't know what the future will hold.
RealMainCharacter
RealMainCharacterLv14

or other major close female characters

RealMainCharacter:what about like his sisters? (sorry i only read like a few chapter)
Slayer104
Slayer104Author

Little one will be completely exclusive and elder one turns into one around 270 chaps in.

RealMainCharacter:what about like his sisters? (sorry i only read like a few chapter)
CJSB_2005
CJSB_2005Lv4

I have read about 60 chapter already. One thing I will say that can help the story is to split up the paragraphs to make it easier to read and digest. Because of how long the paragraph are it makes it less enjoyable to read. It feel like I am reading “a wall” and if I stop reading for a few seconds or have to do something else real quick, it makes it hard to find where I left off and I sometimes have to read the whole paragraph again. This is just my own personal opinion/preference, but I think if you make that change it could help improve the story.

Slayer104
Slayer104Author

Thanks for highlighting it. Actually the first 100 chaps will need a complete overhauling from my side. That was the time when I had just began my writting journey. Will rewrite it probably once I get some free time. Maybe after this first volume ends. Kudos!!

CJSB_2005:I have read about 60 chapter already. One thing I will say that can help the story is to split up the paragraphs to make it easier to read and digest. Because of how long the paragraph are it makes it less enjoyable to read. It feel like I am reading “a wall” and if I stop reading for a few seconds or have to do something else real quick, it makes it hard to find where I left off and I sometimes have to read the whole paragraph again. This is just my own personal opinion/preference, but I think if you make that change it could help improve the story.
CJSB_2005
CJSB_2005Lv4

One more thing use apostrophes (‘‘) for inner monologues and use quotation marks (“”) when a character is talking. You use apostrophes for both and it is sometimes hard to know whether they are talking to someone or if they are having an inner monologue.

Slayer104:Thanks for highlighting it. Actually the first 100 chaps will need a complete overhauling from my side. That was the time when I had just began my writting journey. Will rewrite it probably once I get some free time. Maybe after this first volume ends. Kudos!!
Slayer104
Slayer104Author

It's taken care of after 100 chaps

CJSB_2005:One more thing use apostrophes (‘‘) for inner monologues and use quotation marks (“”) when a character is talking. You use apostrophes for both and it is sometimes hard to know whether they are talking to someone or if they are having an inner monologue.
Landsraad
LandsraadLv5

I jsut want to say, well played on your work. It takes a solid heart to write a novel that clashes with the common masses' ideologies. The Suna ra..pe chapters was a very grand example of maturity. Where others are blinded by their own perspectives and can't see the underlying realty of the situation. I gave this 5 stars review for the breadth of mind.

Slayer104
Slayer104Author

Correction. There was a situation that developed like that. But a hero saved the day.

The content has been deleted
Eclipse_Gate12
Eclipse_Gate12Lv5

When will you start updating

Slayer104:Correction. There was a situation that developed like that. But a hero saved the day.
DirtyBean_Unhappy
DirtyBean_UnhappyLv4

Guy who is younger than 17 but older than 15, when will you start studying?

Eclipse_Gate12:When will you start updating
Fairuz_Robbani
Fairuz_RobbaniLv10

is there still an update for this novel?

D3ath09
D3ath09Lv14

dude can i join your discord? your invitation link is expired already 🥺

Mario_1359
Mario_1359Lv15

mister , will you resume posting new chapters ? a lot of people are waiting let the story continue please

enzo456
enzo456Lv4

fking cuck

Other Reviews
Related Stories

Talent Awakening: Draconic Overlord Of The Apocalypse

"Level up? Dragons?" Eighteen. The age of Awakening. An important moment where every human in the desolate maga-cities unlocks their Talent, a unique ability to carve a path in this monster-plagued apocalyptic world. Alister Hazenworth, a graduating student, and a rising star at the prestigious Aegis Academy, was destined for greatness. His exceptional athleticism and magical aptitude promise a powerful Talent – a guarantee for a secure life and social status. But fate had different plans. During Alister's Awakening ceremony, it's revealed that he's a Summoner. Instead of admiration, he faces mockery. His once bright future turns bleak as his "friends" desert him for Talents they see as more "useful." left alone, Alister awakens a system. [Host found, system binding...] [System binded successfully.] [Congrats, you have gain the status of 'player'.] [Ding!! Congrats to the player for awakening The Dragonforge - an overlord system.] [Ding!! it has been detected that the player possesses a latent draconic aspect, and as such will only be able to summon dragons!!] [Will the player like to proceed with their first summoning?] Cast aside and underestimated, Alister becomes a force to be reckoned with. He embarks on a journey, building his own dragon army – a crew of majestic wyverns, fearsome drakes, and ancient wyrms. He raids the wastelands, reclaims lost resources, and dismantles the prejudice against summoners. Every day, his power grows, his bond with his dragons deepens, and his legend spreads like wildfire. Discord server: https://discord.gg/zbQwWCSCrn [A/N: This is a slow paced novel, don't expect the protagonist to suddenly start out overpowered and start dominating left and right, he will become an overlord of dragons, yes, but it will take time. (⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)] Cover made by me /⁠ᐠ⁠。⁠ꞈ⁠。⁠ᐟ⁠\

Zurbluris · Fantasy
4.4
417 Chs

Earth's Greatest Magus

#Top 20 Webnovel Best Sellers 2021, 2022, 2023, and in 2024 #### History is said to be written by the victors. If so, how about Earth's history? Two millennia ago, a young boy named Emery met a tragic fate. In his final moments, he was transmigrated and accepted into the Universe's most prestigious school of magic. “You are among the chosen few from thousands of human worlds. Whether you seize this opportunity or not, is up to you. You are at Magus Academy, the pinnacle of humanity's ingenuity. Magic, science, and might are all within reach for those who dare to pursue them." [Scan complete - Quadruple affinity. Water, Earth, Plant, and Darkness.] "A quadruple acolyte! Only one in tens of thousands of acolytes possess this!" Thus began Emery’s journey together with his 4 friends from the furthest corner of Earth. Each year they returned to Earth to grow, seek revenge, save the princess, conquer the world, and become Earth's Greatest Magus. Their names are still etched in our history books to this day. Authors Note: I have always been fascinated by writing fantasy relating to historical facts. In this story, you will find characters inspired by real-world myth and legend. The universe I created hopefully will make the reader's imagination excited and logically plausible. I hope you enjoy it. ### Here are some key aspects you'll encounter: MC: The protagonist follows the classic weak-to-strong arc. World: Picture a blend of Harry Potter and Star Wars. System: While it's primarily a magic-based story, there's a structured system in place that's easy to follow. Additionally, elements of cultivation. Harem: No, there are several female interests. But I enjoy romance first. So even if there will be more than one love interest it will be deep. Note: English is not my first language, but you'll notice that my writing and English skills gradually improve throughout the chapters. Other: The novel delves into deep research on science and history, enriching the storyline with factual and intriguing details. Give it a read—you might be pleasantly surprised by what unfolds. Check Out the Video Trailer on youtube type "Earth's Greatest Magus"

Avan · Fantasy
4.5
2539 Chs

The Invincible Full-Moon System

The sinful acts of humanity bring forth a great calamity upon themselves, or so they thought. Supernatural Emergence happened. Supernatural creatures start to come out of nowhere and forcefully claim half of the Earth and massacre any humans that cross their paths. All of them are too powerful, dozens of countries fall under their diabolic claws. Humanity was pushed against the corner. But things started to turn around when humanity began to awaken magical powers. Awakened is the name for those who awaken these powers blessed by the Gods, and they become the pillars of humanity. Rex Silverstar is a normal boy who has a traumatic experience. On the day of the Supernatural Emergence, a Werewolf takes everything he has. He lost his family and his home, left alone in this cruel world. What drives him to live every day is his deep hatred towards the Supernaturals. Joining the military in the hope of helping exterminate the Supernaturals from an early age, he found out that it's impossible to kill the Werewolf that was responsible for killing his parents without being an Awakened. On a fateful night, in a near-death experience, he's given a chance by the full moon. It was the turning point of his life. Obtaining a System that allows him to become stronger, having the potential to match and surpass the Supernaturals, Rex was ecstatic until he saw his stats window. "I'M NOT A WEREWOLF!!" "Daily quest failed, sanity stat has been decreased by 20%!" "Sanity stat is too low, you are unable to contain the blood moon blessing!" "Starting forceful transformation!" "WHAT?! I'm a human! What transformation?!" "You are overwhelmed with bloodlust!" ----- Join my discord: https://discord.gg/cg6a5sBkpJ Support me here: https://ko-fi.com/mrboogey13 ----- I do not own the cover of the book, if you made it and want to take it down just say so and I will immediately change it.

Mrboogey13 · Fantasy
3.9
1469 Chs