Review Detail of TheSpixa in My Wet Nurse

Incredible! This was one of my first “pregnancy” reads. Here are some thoughts I’ve as a reader! Try using a writing and editing software as there are some grammatical errors that make the flow of the story choppy. Try to avoid usage of immediately/ suddenly. Try using connection words as your story tends to progress very fast. Your idea for the story is very solid. You understand the demand of love stories from the readers as the way you brought forth the content of the story is highly impressive. I understand that the idea of children in a romance can be a feat too difficult for others but I believe you executed the plot was perfect. The chapter updates for the story is also very consistent and frequent. Moreover, the characters are well bulit and easy to understand. I believe for every romance fanatic out there, you should definitely give this book a read.