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Kw0z
Kw0zLv142yr
2022-09-19 09:04

Well, the idea was good.. kind of. 3 1/2 chapters in, and it was already kind of unbearable. It just seems like you have no clue what you’re doing, and need some time to improve. You want the main character to be sarcastic so bad that it just comes off as cringey, and this whole thing where the boys and school are picking fights over a girl, and even crying when they see her with the MC is quite honestly just gross, and unrealistic.

You Will Only Be Mine

The_unknown_guy
4.4
391 Chs

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Tartiris_
Tartiris_Lv3

The authors grammar is also garbage.

2yr
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Operr
OperrLv4

it reminds me of...

2yr
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IsekaiLord
IsekaiLordLv4

yup

2yr
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The_unknown_guy
The_unknown_guyAuthor

Another one, huh. Whatever, when I first started writing this novel, I never really knew what to expect but I am truly overwhelmed by the support. Anyway, I can say this is the longest and my best work so far so I really, really hope you like it.

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Kyousuke_
Kyousuke_Lv3

probably one of the surprisingly good yet underrated book out there in this site. I don't understand how this book hasn't taken off yet but to those who happen to be reading my review you should definitely go and try out this book and see what I am saying. I think for the most part you'd agree with what I say specially when you compare the quality of the books on this site. it's pretty good .

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IOnlyReadNTRHentai
IOnlyReadNTRHentaiLv10

Comes here to seek Dao of Yandere. I love it so takes my Five Stars. MC is too normie so it is like you're usual rocom's MC but I will try to get high hopes. I will make a proper review after the chapters meet certain marks. For now, it is Five Stars. Very long Chapters are already enough to give 5 stars but I recommend the author to break them

3yr
LilDoggo
LilDoggoLv15

Typical Japnese shy boy that have me questioning if he's actually gay. If you are into anime manga with high-school drama, cliché stuff about aggressive girl courting shy main boy then this is for you, I just grown out of this phase, it now becomes predictable and boring. No hate on the author, their writing quality is pretty good, just the genre that gutted my review.

2yr
Yatendoouji
YatendooujiLv15

read three chapters and all three were awful. I already know i can't handle the MC and it's unlikely he's going to change much especially considering how the prologue introduced from his point of view, the story. the FMC is fine and would probably be better if it was from her perspective. going to read a few more but so far everything that's been written that I have read is just what seems to be 2/3rds random thoughts of his and then the other 1/3 him being a failure/trying to be a side character. maybe it's just preference that I always hate novels that decide to have a MC have side character syndrome.

2yr
Deputy618
Deputy618Lv15

Out of all the yandere books I've read this proly my favorite. I feel like the character development is really good and the main characters are nice and likable. The only problem is that the author can't magically create 20 chapters a day.

3yr
Caden_Allen
Caden_AllenLv14

anyone know where we can read This for free?

1yr
Daoist_Of_Yanderes
Daoist_Of_YanderesLv3

Reveal spoiler

3yr
DaoistnlcJyx
DaoistnlcJyxLv13

If you wanr your brain to leave this planet, this is definitely the story for you. Mc is the most dumbest person yoh will read about so far.

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