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I am going to stop reading. Would rather be lobotmised then read this shit.

FeliCa whattt!

I only remember jumping off of yachts into a swamp and jumping off cliffs.

Basement dwelling virgin author. .-.-.-.-.-

This reads like a my three beautiful wives are beautiful vampires clone from the beginning. Honestly this is me reading poison and injeesting poison. Your grammar is okay. Your world building sound exactly like MTBWV. The only unique thing I could pick out is the weird parasite in the MC’s soul. The writing order and dialogue is a complete mess. Why on earth would you talk to a parasite in your soul in the middle of a battle. It’s either the battle or the talking not both. I am sure you average trash WebNovel reader would like this, but I would never read this seriously. Oh and the MC acts like an adhd, edgy, horny teenager. Also if you are going to try and copy a novel off of another novel then at least copy a novel that is better than MTBWV. Why make a shitty wish fulfillment, when you can make a really interesting story. Examples: The Legendary Mechanic | Reverend Insanity | Lord of the Mysteries | Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor | The First Order

This is a Yandere slice of life with hardly any plot that you need to pick apart from all of the chapters that glorify Victor. Only read this for delusional self fulfillment! The author could have made this something more than just 600-700 chapters of mostly filler and then the mc suddenly gains like what 25, 30 wives in two chapters. No real character development no, the flimsy reason the author gave was oh victor in hell for 500 year and did not see his wives; now victor goes and f*cks all of his 7 wives realatives and women in 500 sq ft. You know what happens next… guess.. all of the women fucked by the mc now automatically become his wives and they just accept it with no reason other than; oh mc handsome must fuck like some brainless whore dog. The author is the biggest disappointment to this novel give any other established author who does not write harem this novel and they will do a 💯% better job. Better than the monkey brain shit the author puts out. Wait I should apologize to the monkeys.🙊