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shubh_gupta
shubh_guptaLv23yr
2021-09-06 13:37

Problems:- 1. Bad sentence structure 2. Unreasonable occurrences of exclamations 3. Bad logic Not recommended at all. I gave this a try despite red flags, and I regretted it. Your English skills might degrade by prolonged exposure to this sort of content, so read at your own risk.

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Pronoobity
PronoobityLv15

You expect too much from WN. They’re trying to enter the western culture in terms of novels which leads to either whitewashed Translated chinese novels or fanfiction level writing.

shubh_gupta
shubh_guptaLv2

First of all, there are some really good novels on webnovel that I absolutely love. So, the expectations I have from WN are reasonable enough. I don't mind ignoring some logic, but in this one it was slapping me to get my attention. Also, if you just accept whatever you get even if it literally lowers your IQ, then you are giving he translators/authors a free pass. You would be making them think they can get away with it and that it's okay. If you want to know what I consider a good novel -read Chaos' Heir, Lord of the Mysteries, Birth of the Demonic Sword, A Will Eternal, Top Tier providence....(Too long a name), alien evolution system etc. The reason I've rated this so low is because this is truly much worse than typical content available here (at least in my opinion).

Pronoobity:You expect too much from WN. They’re trying to enter the western culture in terms of novels which leads to either whitewashed Translated chinese novels or fanfiction level writing.
Hunter1105
Hunter1105Lv3

bad story

deletedaccount_
deletedaccount_Lv1

read Hitman Hitman Garden, you won't be disappointed.

deletedaccount_
deletedaccount_Lv1

read Hitman Hitman Garden, you won't be disappointed.

Hunter1105:bad story
pheonixblue01
pheonixblue01Lv15

Or worse, both at once.

Pronoobity:You expect too much from WN. They’re trying to enter the western culture in terms of novels which leads to either whitewashed Translated chinese novels or fanfiction level writing.
Laxarus
LaxarusLv15

Absolutely right. At least on this platform, translators are getting money for their work. Many people confuse webnovel with fan translations. Webnovel is not a fan translation platform. It is frigging official paid platform and they need to deliver quality works because they are getting paid. For fan translations, the translator really does not need to accommodate anyone because they are doing it for fun of it. However, webnovel is a service that is taking money from you to deliver enjoyment.

shubh_gupta:First of all, there are some really good novels on webnovel that I absolutely love. So, the expectations I have from WN are reasonable enough. I don't mind ignoring some logic, but in this one it was slapping me to get my attention. Also, if you just accept whatever you get even if it literally lowers your IQ, then you are giving he translators/authors a free pass. You would be making them think they can get away with it and that it's okay. If you want to know what I consider a good novel -read Chaos' Heir, Lord of the Mysteries, Birth of the Demonic Sword, A Will Eternal, Top Tier providence....(Too long a name), alien evolution system etc. The reason I've rated this so low is because this is truly much worse than typical content available here (at least in my opinion).
Wes_Mon
Wes_MonLv3

wouldn't the school being Hogwarts make it a fanfic?

shubh_gupta
shubh_guptaLv2

No, there is only a common name of the academy between this and the HP series. However, I highly recommend you to NOT read this.

Wes_Mon:wouldn't the school being Hogwarts make it a fanfic?
Dave_S
Dave_SLv15

Im a big fan of eve’s work, though im not useually a fan of cultivator novels i really like birth of the demonic sword and i love chaos heir, in my opinion its definatly 1 of the best novels on here, showing how far he has come from starting his Work anyways…. I wanna check out some new material but have all the same issues u have, logic has to be sound and translation has to be decent and my achilies heel is it needs to have english names so i can remember whos who… do these novels u mentioned fit this criteria? Thanx in advance WN work is far to dilouted and i dont have it in me anymore to read 30-50 chapters to find out its utter garbage

shubh_gupta:First of all, there are some really good novels on webnovel that I absolutely love. So, the expectations I have from WN are reasonable enough. I don't mind ignoring some logic, but in this one it was slapping me to get my attention. Also, if you just accept whatever you get even if it literally lowers your IQ, then you are giving he translators/authors a free pass. You would be making them think they can get away with it and that it's okay. If you want to know what I consider a good novel -read Chaos' Heir, Lord of the Mysteries, Birth of the Demonic Sword, A Will Eternal, Top Tier providence....(Too long a name), alien evolution system etc. The reason I've rated this so low is because this is truly much worse than typical content available here (at least in my opinion).
shubh_gupta
shubh_guptaLv2

Yeah Eve is awesome. Try Lord of the Mysteries. It has a slow and sort of unbelievable start (considering that Eve's novels have no goldfinger for the MC), but MC's goldfinger is not useful for fights, and the battles require smarts. The others don't have English names, or have some other problems, but Lord of the Mysteries should satisfy most of your criterias. It does not have cultivation though, but there is a power system.

Dave_S:Im a big fan of eve’s work, though im not useually a fan of cultivator novels i really like birth of the demonic sword and i love chaos heir, in my opinion its definatly 1 of the best novels on here, showing how far he has come from starting his Work anyways…. I wanna check out some new material but have all the same issues u have, logic has to be sound and translation has to be decent and my achilies heel is it needs to have english names so i can remember whos who… do these novels u mentioned fit this criteria? Thanx in advance WN work is far to dilouted and i dont have it in me anymore to read 30-50 chapters to find out its utter garbage
Dave_S
Dave_SLv15

Thank you, tbh iv looked up cultivator novels after watching birth and i cant get into any of them anyways, Ill give lord of mysteries a go My most liked so far if ur interested Crystalis (free) Surpreme mangus Mother of learning (free) Khaos Heir BOTDS Release that witch The beginning after the end (amazon £3 each dont buy chapers online) has decent audio The rangers apprentice (amazon) best audio ever, brilliant narrator

shubh_gupta:Yeah Eve is awesome. Try Lord of the Mysteries. It has a slow and sort of unbelievable start (considering that Eve's novels have no goldfinger for the MC), but MC's goldfinger is not useful for fights, and the battles require smarts. The others don't have English names, or have some other problems, but Lord of the Mysteries should satisfy most of your criterias. It does not have cultivation though, but there is a power system.
Dave_S
Dave_SLv15

Yet there are cream of the crop Supreme mangus Khaos heir Crystalis Sound logic, good writing and no plot holes Im only here for the good stuff, this rating helps me

Pronoobity:You expect too much from WN. They’re trying to enter the western culture in terms of novels which leads to either whitewashed Translated chinese novels or fanfiction level writing.
GreatDaoofspace
GreatDaoofspaceLv15

Romance ? Harem?

shubh_gupta
shubh_guptaLv2

Didn't reach that far

GreatDaoofspace:Romance ? Harem?
Kaiser_6117
Kaiser_6117Lv14

can you recommend me some good novel/fanfics?

shubh_gupta
shubh_guptaLv2

The first 4 are top class, the rest are just good or not related to cultivation but not in a particular order 1.Chaos' Heir 2.Birth of the Demonic Sword 3.Lord of the Mysteries 4.Reverend Insanity 5.Monarch of Evernight 6.Mother of Learning 7.Abridged Guide to Evil 8.Tree of Aeons 9.A Will Eternal 10.Desolate Era 11.Sovereign of Judgement

Kaiser_6117:can you recommend me some good novel/fanfics?
Kaiser_6117
Kaiser_6117Lv14

thank you though I've read most of them still there some that I've not read yet so thanks

shubh_gupta:The first 4 are top class, the rest are just good or not related to cultivation but not in a particular order 1.Chaos' Heir 2.Birth of the Demonic Sword 3.Lord of the Mysteries 4.Reverend Insanity 5.Monarch of Evernight 6.Mother of Learning 7.Abridged Guide to Evil 8.Tree of Aeons 9.A Will Eternal 10.Desolate Era 11.Sovereign of Judgement
Pillow_Melt
Pillow_MeltLv12

RenZenCheon
RenZenCheonLv2

Magic don't rely on Logic. 😛😬

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