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Drew_Archeron
Drew_ArcheronLv12yr
2022-08-15 07:43

This tale is well written, though a bit heavy on "Tell" vs show. still a good showing from this author, and I will be curious to see how this plot develops.

Alfonse's Test

KiriDuGema
4.7
19 Chs

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Mary_Algen_Guiang1
Mary_Algen_Guiang1Lv14

I'm excited to read further into the story! The story promises of an adventure and i can't wait to sink my teeth into it! The protagonist is relatable, and I love him so! good job author! I'm cheering you on! aja! ♥♥♥♥♥

3yr

SinnWrites
SinnWritesLv1

I really liked it there was just a few things that you could work on a bit more. I really focused on your first two chapters and helping you with those so you can see what mistakes and hopefully apply it to the future. But I loved it and you don't need to review mine but you can if you want!

2yr
NotBeatrix
NotBeatrixLv2

Reveal spoiler

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steph_pesi
steph_pesiLv3

I'm really enjoying this story as I'm reading I have to say. You have action, fantasy and adventure. I'm loving the journey of the protagonist and I am strapped in for the ride.

2yr
f0011
f0011Lv10

Pretty solid story, the author brings you to an interesting plot from the start, however i do see some flaws, but looking at the newer chapters, it seems as the author overcoated most of them. Keep up the good work.

2yr
KV_Cleo
KV_CleoLv2

Great Story! It is so interesting and has a great potential. I like how this story is going so far. Hoping for more soon! Can't wait for more chapters!

3yr
Kirtirajput
KirtirajputLv3

Not gonna lie, love the synopsis. Always up for adventures. Haha. Fighting, author.........................................................................

3yr
Silent_Listener
Silent_ListenerLv2

Great story, Author. It's really very impressive. Keep on going Author. Fighting. .......................................................................

3yr
Deamon_Paradox
Deamon_ParadoxLv1

.................................................. The story has great potential . also kudos to you for making it interesting . but TBH there's more than meets the eye in this novel . so continue writing good luck.

3yr
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