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  • Drew_Archeron
    Drew_Archerona year ago
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    this book is just getting started but it has an interesting plot. still some grammar issues to work through but its a cool plot concept. keep going author!

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  • Drew_Archeron
    Drew_Archeron2 years ago
    Posted

    it's a great start to the tale. currently, there are only 4 chapters but has potential for sure. Keep up the work, author! Hopefully you will continue to learn and grow through the whole process!

  • Drew_Archeron
    Drew_Archeron2 years ago
    Posted

    A werewolf. A vampire. With electrokinesis and Telekinesis. All in one person. What could possibly go wrong? should be interesting to see where the author takes this tale

  • Drew_Archeron
    Drew_Archeron2 years ago
    Posted

    The plot is an interesting concept. the writing itself could be cleaned up a bit. some of the sentences dont quite flow, but putting that aside its still an interesting plot about this young billionaire who starts off not remembering anything. it has potential for sure

  • Drew_Archeron
    Drew_Archeron2 years ago
    Posted

    Purgatory, a hell all its own. so far this is showing to be an interesting novel. its well written and keeps you interested. there are some 4th wall breaks but easy enough to over look. should be interesting to see where this one goes

  • Drew_Archeron
    Drew_Archeron2 years ago
    Posted

    still early for this tale but its interesting. murder mystory concept that shoudl be interesting to see where the author takes this tale. The main character is a manipulative bastard but you need that to win in a squid games type unknown world.

  • Drew_Archeron
    Drew_Archeron2 years ago
    Posted

    This is a decent tale but there is a ton of new terms and culture that are thrust upon you at the start with little explanation or word vomit overkill in telling what makes up the world. there isnt a natural progression of information and world building. could be a fun plot over all but one likely needs to be well versed in similar stories and mythology to grasp the concepts in this tale. this is likely not a tale for Someone not familiar with these concepts from previous readings. still an interesting concept, and could be interesting to see where the author takes us in this rebirth tale of revenge and deep bloodlines.

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  • Drew_Archeron
    Drew_Archeron2 years ago
    Posted

    I am looking forward to seeing what author ChaosInvoker has in store for us with this one! Bit of an odd start but once you get into the main plot its quite interesting. only 21 chapters so far as of this review but promising.

  • Drew_Archeron
    Drew_Archeron2 years ago
    Posted

    Afraid of the dark? perhaps not a book for you. astral projection or dream walking to strange lands with stranger creatures and beings. will the boogeyman follow you back to the waking world? should be a fun read for those looking for a bit of Halloween fun.

  • Drew_Archeron
    Drew_Archeron2 years ago
    Commented

    will be interesting to see where this goes