Item: Alfonse's Test
Rating: 4.8
Author: f0011

f0011Lv102yr

2022-08-15 19:04

Pretty solid story, the author brings you to an interesting plot from the start, however i do see some flaws, but looking at the newer chapters, it seems as the author overcoated most of them. Keep up the good work.

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