So I read both stories and only reviewed the newest story so here's a late review. Before let's get something straight, He is not 100% Johnny SilverHand, what I mean with this is that he is a guy who got transmigrated? yeah transmigrated into One piece and his new body is that of Johnny SilverHand. With that out of the way on to reviewing. 1-Writing Quality: I liked the writing on this story and so far all of Wicked's stories. There is little to no complications in understanding and most of the things people don't understand is mostly due to not paying enough attention. [So five stars here] 2-Story Development: The story has both slow moments and fast moments(Not in chapters, I mean as in skipping unnecessary things also labeled as timeskips or minor timeskips). The story in general has a good feel in it's development, this also includes the MCs interactions with the world and with it's inhabitants. For some it might have a slow development but it's to build the world, the characters and also building an understanding with the readers about the events and the characters (personal opinion, don't throw stones yet😂) [Again five stars] 3-Character Design: The characters are well designed so far, the author tried to maintain the personalities and speaking habits of some OG One Piece characters and succeeded so far. The MC I also consistent with his traits and goals, and we even see slight changes along the way in some of the MCs companions so that shows how well made the characters are. There is no forced change or moments, it's fluid and feels right. [D**n this is another five stars] 4-Updating Stability: As someone who's been reading since only 25 chapters I can say that the updates where consistent/stable. Key word being "where" because it isn't anymore, we'd get regular updates before but I can understand the motive for the lack of update right now as the newest story is taking the main focus of the author(Also go read it, it's a great read and is competing with Johnny SilverHand on my favourite of the month... Not that that changes anything to anyone 😅). Putting my personal opinion of five stars based on the previous updates and the constant updates on the new book(different books need different ratings) I gave the following rating. [Three stars for updates since Wicked didn't stay he stopped updating altogether] 5-World Building: The world feels like One Piece and that's the goal. There's no farfetched creations such as a island where they use cars and telephones, it's consistent with the OG world with some original islands and stuff since we needed a starting point. The description of the world or scenery on each moment is informative but also not excessive to the point it'd feel like an info dump. The areas are well envisioned and are not that hard to picture in some moments when you hear that MC went this way and you can imagine that that's where person "Y" is. Overall the world building is on point and super well made. [Five stars for World Building] Hope this review helps new readers, I recommend trying the first 10 chapters before coming to any rash conclusions about the story. Also see the tags, if it's not your cup of tea and you don't want to risk it then just don't read it.
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Highly accurate and I'm surprised you did all this, it starts a bit slow at first but then it gets really good.
I know right, it gets good after the initial phase. I usually rate/review every book I read like this before there's usually people who give low rating because of one thing they didn't like(eg. Some give one star because MC didn't get one girl, or MC has a Harem... WHILE THERE'S A HAREM TAG!) and some give 5 stars and only saying that it's good but not explaining s**t at all, and we have the worst of them all... the ones who only want to grind exp with comments, the classic "more more more more more" or "It's the best one piece story 25x".
