ok lets do it writing quality- didnt see any spelling errors or anything like that so I guess 5 stars? stability of updates- superb, not only 1 chapter a day guaranteed but sometimes 2 so its 5 stars story development- the story develops and gives an original take on the journey of one piece, most stories focus more on power money or bounty but this story is about an adventure, 5 stars again character design- the author makes a lot of cool and original characters with original backstories and personalitys 5 stars world background- its one piece the author didn't really changed fundamental stuff but he added original things to the world again 5 stars basically, a must-read for one piece fans, unlike most stories on this website this story gives a story and not just wish fulfillment (which honestly I don't really like) give it a try

So I read both stories and only reviewed the newest story so here's a late review. Before let's get something straight, He is not 100% Johnny SilverHand, what I mean with this is that he is a guy who got transmigrated? yeah transmigrated into One piece and his new body is that of Johnny SilverHand. With that out of the way on to reviewing. 1-Writing Quality: I liked the writing on this story and so far all of Wicked's stories. There is little to no complications in understanding and most of the things people don't understand is mostly due to not paying enough attention. [So five stars here] 2-Story Development: The story has both slow moments and fast moments(Not in chapters, I mean as in skipping unnecessary things also labeled as timeskips or minor timeskips). The story in general has a good feel in it's development, this also includes the MCs interactions with the world and with it's inhabitants. For some it might have a slow development but it's to build the world, the characters and also building an understanding with the readers about the events and the characters (personal opinion, don't throw stones yet😂) [Again five stars] 3-Character Design: The characters are well designed so far, the author tried to maintain the personalities and speaking habits of some OG One Piece characters and succeeded so far. The MC I also consistent with his traits and goals, and we even see slight changes along the way in some of the MCs companions so that shows how well made the characters are. There is no forced change or moments, it's fluid and feels right. [D**n this is another five stars] 4-Updating Stability: As someone who's been reading since only 25 chapters I can say that the updates where consistent/stable. Key word being "where" because it isn't anymore, we'd get regular updates before but I can understand the motive for the lack of update right now as the newest story is taking the main focus of the author(Also go read it, it's a great read and is competing with Johnny SilverHand on my favourite of the month... Not that that changes anything to anyone 😅). Putting my personal opinion of five stars based on the previous updates and the constant updates on the new book(different books need different ratings) I gave the following rating. [Three stars for updates since Wicked didn't stay he stopped updating altogether] 5-World Building: The world feels like One Piece and that's the goal. There's no farfetched creations such as a island where they use cars and telephones, it's consistent with the OG world with some original islands and stuff since we needed a starting point. The description of the world or scenery on each moment is informative but also not excessive to the point it'd feel like an info dump. The areas are well envisioned and are not that hard to picture in some moments when you hear that MC went this way and you can imagine that that's where person "Y" is. Overall the world building is on point and super well made. [Five stars for World Building] Hope this review helps new readers, I recommend trying the first 10 chapters before coming to any rash conclusions about the story. Also see the tags, if it's not your cup of tea and you don't want to risk it then just don't read it.

move on citizen, nothing to see here just another shameless author giving five stars to his work XD ...................................................

love the story so far, the mc is interesting and engaging, the crew is a good fit and the realistic tint you give one piece is delightful. hope to read more of this and thx for the update

Incredible and interesting idea that I don't remember seeing in any other ff on this or other sites, until the current moment (chapter 9) is being very well implemented. The author is to be congratulated👍

Author, just wants to remind you that as one of your readers, we are really thankful that you made this kind of unique, original and special kind of story, the characters are believable and I cared about them all. plot has many twists and turns, I couldn't stop reading, and I really appreciate that the crew isn't afraid to shed blood and is always two steps ahead of the game. The power scaling is not too broken, just perfect, we really appreciate everything you do, you should be so proud of yourself, you made the best One Piece fiction! In my humble opinion, I along with the other readers thank you, for your hard work and effort in making this story, you're taking your time, researching and planning on how the story will continue in a unique and interesting fashion, get some rest if you need to, your health is more important, don't overwork yourself, perfection takes time, your creativity knows no bounds, and you're an awesome person, I'm excited to see what will happen next, I'm hoping that my crew suggestion will be recruited in the future, that said, keep up the excellent and amazing work!

The author can definitely write a book and planned the plot but unfortunately the execution was a little bit off. The story started off with a bang and captured many interests but the training arc with Wilson took too long that it bore me out. The pace is a little bit slow at the start and lacks captivity although it is quite unique. The mc likes to do as he pleases but doesn't act as such sometimes but it was for the plot so all is fine. I couldn't understand if the mc wants to join straw hats or make own crew at the start, ruined my mood for a bit there. The mc becomes Johnny but doesn't have The Original Johnny's charm, the manipulative quirk is a part of Johnny. Didn't expect the mc to be undecisive for a couple of chapters, almost made me drop right there. The system upgrade doriki was a first for me, it was a simple but amazing idea. Wilson is just some random gorilla that mc befriended and invited to the crew. update is good. The author knows the world of one piece well enough, the slow paced just made me thought the author doesn't know how to progress the storyline and was stalling instead. Don't mind me, just someone with a thought.

Hey, love the story so far! It offers this feeling other OP fanfics can't and for that im giving you 5 stars. I did notice however while the grammar is good it could be better. If your looking for an editor hmu you can check my other work if your interested hit me up : D

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