Ima make an honest review, little harsh. First of all, this story is gold, pacing is a little fast at times bit it perfectly fits the story. Secondly, the way you bring your character into the story is logical and fits perfectly as well, even side characters like the MC's parents are well made even if they hardly have any time in the story. Although the MC himself does lack a little personality. The power scaling is perfect, not too OP but he is getting there and its pretty well done. And next is the world building, honestly a little lacking but its not needed too much so it's perfect as far. Now as for your writing skills, they are quite good and your way of thinking only makes it better; and for someone who doesn't have english as their first language this is really impressive. Honestly the only real problem I see are those that haven't happened yet. For which I recommend an editor, or a discord or something. Aside from that I cant see anything wrong or lacking here, so good job man.
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thank you for your honest review. I can only say that I will work towards developing Katsuo's character and because I reached canon, things will start slowing down a bit and for the same reason and because I don't want to be restrained by canon there will be more world-building. For my writing skills I have to thank my eight year experience of reading webnovels (XD) and Grammarly, as for the editing, I usually do it myself but I can think about creating a discord server. Once again, thank you for your review, it's amazingly detailed and points to my flaws and where I can improve
omg an author who uses grammarly
BloodStone:thank you for your honest review. I can only say that I will work towards developing Katsuo's character and because I reached canon, things will start slowing down a bit and for the same reason and because I don't want to be restrained by canon there will be more world-building. For my writing skills I have to thank my eight year experience of reading webnovels (XD) and Grammarly, as for the editing, I usually do it myself but I can think about creating a discord server. Once again, thank you for your review, it's amazingly detailed and points to my flaws and where I can improveimage
it takes no effort, a minute and it's installed, I even have it on my phone
Dookie_Man:omg an author who uses grammarlyimage
i suggest it to every author and they go on a rant saying how hard it is to edit. like bro just use GRAMMARLY
BloodStone:it takes no effort, a minute and it's installed, I even have it on my phone
will there be a romance or love interest?
BloodStone:thank you for your honest review. I can only say that I will work towards developing Katsuo's character and because I reached canon, things will start slowing down a bit and for the same reason and because I don't want to be restrained by canon there will be more world-building. For my writing skills I have to thank my eight year experience of reading webnovels (XD) and Grammarly, as for the editing, I usually do it myself but I can think about creating a discord server. Once again, thank you for your review, it's amazingly detailed and points to my flaws and where I can improveimage
Grammarly is very decent but it isn't godly.
Dookie_Man:i suggest it to every author and they go on a rant saying how hard it is to edit. like bro just use GRAMMARLYimage
Abadom:Grammarly is very decent but it isn't godly.
