webnovel
DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv143yr
2021-11-28 08:13

Story had potential with the game creating but then it became trash, then it became a dumpster fire. MC gets NPCs but they are actually real people so have fun with that..... but the worst thing is the awful OC they is with the MC. Makes no sense to create a random OC when there are so many characters in Marvel. Just awful. Then somehow professor X is able to find him? Trash. He tries to read his mind and the MC just says stop? Trash. Now the Ancient One found him but she wasnt able to before? Was it because or the trash forced part with Professor X somehow finding him? No idea but this was a complete waste of time that i regret reading. Dumpster fire of a fic

Liked by 18 people

LIKE
Replies12
DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Also apparently the MC gives out his powers to others so have fun reading this garbage

DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Just read chapter 32 comments lol and know that the author said they “fixed” it in the next chapter but actually did nothing lol thank god for skipping and reading comments Lol so bad

Ghost_Playing
Ghost_PlayingLv15

Thanks for saving my time from this story. (I hate the sharing part of systems as it makes no sense in my opinion...)<—I can accept if they get some boost but not the ''sharing'' since the mc will just turn into a bland machine that gives out benefits without any real return and let’s not forget that a system is normally there to support its reincarnator/(mc) so if it also can be shared with others then I see no reason why the mc even exists if such an illogical action that probably was also forced is made...

DaoistyQNGiX:Just read chapter 32 comments lol and know that the author said they “fixed” it in the next chapter but actually did nothing lol thank god for skipping and reading comments Lol so bad
AzureFluteFan2
AzureFluteFan2Lv5

There’s nothing wrong with an OC. I prefer OC characters to be in these types of stories because typically interactions happen a lot between them and the MC. It also gives an additional character to love but only if it’s done right.

AzureFluteFan2
AzureFluteFan2Lv5

Yeah I’m not reading because of that. The MC(or MCs) is typically meant to be special, so if they just hand out what’s so special about them to others like candy then they don’t become special and now they’re just a dude. I don’t want to read a story about just some dude. Others might, but that just ain’t for me.

DaoistyQNGiX:Also apparently the MC gives out his powers to others so have fun reading this garbage
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

No great story ever revolved around getting benefits when taking any action. literally no story. lol this app and its fanfics have dulled the minds of folk who are too poor to pay to read something real. lol they get on here and cry about professor X and Dumbledore bamboozling everyone because they are more evil than the evil folk. lol the stupidity is mind blowing. im happy quality stories don't follow your idea of a good story. it isn't about logic. id share everything with my fam and friends. Im guessing yours must suck to think its logical to do otherwise. Sucks to suck.

Ghost_Playing:Thanks for saving my time from this story. (I hate the sharing part of systems as it makes no sense in my opinion...)<—I can accept if they get some boost but not the ''sharing'' since the mc will just turn into a bland machine that gives out benefits without any real return and let’s not forget that a system is normally there to support its reincarnator/(mc) so if it also can be shared with others then I see no reason why the mc even exists if such an illogical action that probably was also forced is made...
image
Jonathan_Lam_2034
Jonathan_Lam_2034Lv4

hmmm wonder why this guy is on webnovel reading this free fanfic when he can just buy a real story with his real money [img=thinking]

DetachedDreamer:No great story ever revolved around getting benefits when taking any action. literally no story. lol this app and its fanfics have dulled the minds of folk who are too poor to pay to read something real. lol they get on here and cry about professor X and Dumbledore bamboozling everyone because they are more evil than the evil folk. lol the stupidity is mind blowing. im happy quality stories don't follow your idea of a good story. it isn't about logic. id share everything with my fam and friends. Im guessing yours must suck to think its logical to do otherwise. Sucks to suck.
image
Jonathan_Lam_2034
Jonathan_Lam_2034Lv4

must've really dulled his mind to read on this app lololololololol

DetachedDreamer:No great story ever revolved around getting benefits when taking any action. literally no story. lol this app and its fanfics have dulled the minds of folk who are too poor to pay to read something real. lol they get on here and cry about professor X and Dumbledore bamboozling everyone because they are more evil than the evil folk. lol the stupidity is mind blowing. im happy quality stories don't follow your idea of a good story. it isn't about logic. id share everything with my fam and friends. Im guessing yours must suck to think its logical to do otherwise. Sucks to suck.
image
Ghost_Playing
Ghost_PlayingLv15

Sure, I’d share it with my family and close friends. Why not? BUT if you write it in a story then the MC stops having a purpose of there is nothing special about him. Lastly, its quite the low blow to say that my friends must suck even though it never had anything to do with them in the first place as I and You are talking about two different things since you just talked about what you’d be doing if YOU are the mc while I talked about my view of reading something like that. Now, idc if you read this or not since your seem like a child lashing out on viewpoint opinions you don’t like. In an exam they would tell you that you missed the KEYPOINT of the question dûmb@šš…

DetachedDreamer:No great story ever revolved around getting benefits when taking any action. literally no story. lol this app and its fanfics have dulled the minds of folk who are too poor to pay to read something real. lol they get on here and cry about professor X and Dumbledore bamboozling everyone because they are more evil than the evil folk. lol the stupidity is mind blowing. im happy quality stories don't follow your idea of a good story. it isn't about logic. id share everything with my fam and friends. Im guessing yours must suck to think its logical to do otherwise. Sucks to suck.
image
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

if his power defines how special he is then thats a terrible perspective or VIEWPOINT (I capitalized too lol) the story has more problems that need resolving if powers are such an integral part of what makes a story good. guess thats your opinion but there's many other points that should take priority. again im happy quality stories don't follow your VIEWPOINT. Dummy. lol

Ghost_Playing:Sure, I’d share it with my family and close friends. Why not? BUT if you write it in a story then the MC stops having a purpose of there is nothing special about him. Lastly, its quite the low blow to say that my friends must suck even though it never had anything to do with them in the first place as I and You are talking about two different things since you just talked about what you’d be doing if YOU are the mc while I talked about my view of reading something like that. Now, idc if you read this or not since your seem like a child lashing out on viewpoint opinions you don’t like. In an exam they would tell you that you missed the KEYPOINT of the question dûmb@šš…
Thehighest_throne2
Thehighest_throne2Lv1

Luckily I haven't read it

DaoistyQNGiX:Also apparently the MC gives out his powers to others so have fun reading this garbage
THIZZGATOR
THIZZGATORLv4

dude if you were reading a book about werewolves and it turned out to just be them turning into cats youd have issues with the book right? Stop your holier than thou attitude and jog on you petty child.

DetachedDreamer:if his power defines how special he is then thats a terrible perspective or VIEWPOINT (I capitalized too lol) the story has more problems that need resolving if powers are such an integral part of what makes a story good. guess thats your opinion but there's many other points that should take priority. again im happy quality stories don't follow your VIEWPOINT. Dummy. lol
image
Other Reviews
Unholy_Angel
Unholy_AngelAuthor

Shameless author here adding my own review ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

empire1
empire1Lv14
Related Stories

HP: Wizardry’s a Hassle, Wand in the Right Hand, Gun in the Left

[HP Fanfiction] Alias: It's not easy to be a reincarnated wizard, wand in right hand and gun in left hand. The emotionally defective No. 13 died in an empty and cold ward. The emotionally defective Glenn Hawthorne was born in 1979. He longed for a peaceful life and reincarnated into a new world with family, friends, and everything a normal person should have. But a sudden attack shattered the peaceful life he was enjoying, and Glenn discovered the secrets hidden under the surface of this world. Magic? Alchemy? Obscurus? What are these magical and magical things? Glenn doesn't know yet. But as a killer in his previous life, he developed some interest in this. In order to seek revenge, he chose to enter Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. A former professional killer who has mastered modern killing techniques and is keen on manufacturing, modifying and collecting hot weapons, what kind of sparks will he collide with this magical world after learning the two skills of magic and alchemy? "I just want to live a stable and peaceful retirement life, but you disturbed me." "Choose a way to die." Glenn said this expressionlessly, with the gun in his hand already loaded. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is a translation. The original title is:身为杀手想跟赫敏谈恋爱怎么了? Welcome to my Patreon advanced chapters! Get early access to 50+ Additionally, there are more exciting novels being updated regularly. patreon.com/DarkGolds

YueQiu · Movies
Not enough ratings
127 Chs