there is not much to complain about with the story but Author-san if you would like this novel to be enjoyed by more people PLEASE fix the grammar, it has been quite terrible lately, just fixing the basic 'him her she I me we his hers' would make the story so much better and alot more comprehensive.
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My level of English is -5 therefore I only use a translator, if the novel becomes more famous maybe those who asked me to publish the novel will help me translate, otherwise the bad English will continue until the novel is finished, I'm sorry because.
if you want I could point out some major mistakes in the novel in the comments and give a sentence that can make it better
EdwinRBM:My level of English is -5 therefore I only use a translator, if the novel becomes more famous maybe those who asked me to publish the novel will help me translate, otherwise the bad English will continue until the novel is finished, I'm sorry because.
As I said, I don't know English and therefore it will be difficult for me even if you put it on me with apples, I will not understand and the translator does not help much, before publishing each chapter in English I have to correct many mistakes that the translator makes me, such as periods and quotation marks that do not exist or hyphens placed in the middle of a sentence.
mistermoon:if you want I could point out some major mistakes in the novel in the comments and give a sentence that can make it better
if you're using Microsoft word there is a function to replace one word with another. just a thought.
EdwinRBM:My level of English is -5 therefore I only use a translator, if the novel becomes more famous maybe those who asked me to publish the novel will help me translate, otherwise the bad English will continue until the novel is finished, I'm sorry because.
