mistermoon
I like to be in my own lil world
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hey just wanted to check up on you, your ur doing great with the constant uploads. and also wanted to ask if you would want me to point out things you can improve in in chapters, I'm no editer but I can help with the obvious things so ppl can have a better reading experience,I loved the novel so far and wanted to help out
it was enjoyable, a great time killer but i had trouble understanding the story, i can't say much about world-building since i only read 50 chapters character development was also good if a bit stiff. the only thing that i found odd was him going after a married women with two kids but its the olden times so what evre
the beggining was really well done, altho it could use some re works overall it was very good
hey so you evre going to contuine that novel why are all the chapters delated