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ChangedReviewer
ChangedReviewerLv42yr
2022-11-10 02:54

4.8 / 5 Awesome story!!! Really good plot. The world building is nice, the characters have a realistic feel about them, making them feel a lot better than chars in 99% of all webnovels here. System & Magic & Stats & Skills all make sense and feel very interesting. One thing you could improve on is to try to condense the stats a bit. You are already at a point where he has so many skills, spells and abilities that it is a bit chaotic. You yourself forgot a few times to add skills & abilities he used to the list. Also there are quite a few typos. Anyway just a minor thing you could potentially improve... anyway it is nearly perfect. It is on the level where I would actually pay to read this.

Records of the Dark Magus

Eggcellent
4.8
99 Chs

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Eggcellent
EggcellentAuthor

Thank you for the awesome review. I was considering starting to write again, but I don't have much free time anymore

2yr
ChangedReviewer
ChangedReviewerLv4

So many stories got monetized... yours is easily qualified too. Maybe take a break and write a bit on the weekends? Maybe save up a few chapters and then try to get monetized too. Maybe even reread/rewrite a few chapters and aim for an Amazon release. Trust me your book is actually good. So good that you could make money with it if you really try.

Eggcellent:Thank you for the awesome review. I was considering starting to write again, but I don't have much free time anymore
2yr
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TReX_Gaming
TReX_GamingLv13

Oui une des meilleures histoires bon travail continue.

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SIN3
SIN3Lv11

Can you continue in the future?

Eggcellent:Thank you for the awesome review. I was considering starting to write again, but I don't have much free time anymore
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FlyEye
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Good Work, I like how the mc is question his Charackter while in persuit of power. The cheat is not op, just a bonus to reach his goals. Keep it up.

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SIN3
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SIN3
SIN3Lv11

A very beautiful novel, I enjoyed it so much that I suddenly found myself reaching the last chapter without realizing it. The novel is very great, but there are some things that I wish the writer would focus on. If he really did that, the level of the novel would greatly increase. This thing is to make the hero focus and give great attention to the subject of experiences of all kinds. Try to delve into the experiences. It is okay to waste dozens of chapters. Or even hundreds of chapters for one experience. This will make the novel delve into its field (the wizarding world) The current way in which the hero advances. I did not like that it is very superficial. Most of the time, time jumps, and this is a very big mistake. You must make the hero delve into ways to increase his strength. The viewer must Watching the progress of the hero step by step, this will make the viewers love the novel madly. The viewer will have a passion for the novel, which increases its popularity . I hope my comment was useful to you, thank you ❤❤❤

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Master_Of_gu
Master_Of_guLv1

Great character on the path of evil I hope he continues cruelty, killing and looting because it will become more exciting Great character on the path of evil I hope he continues cruelty, killing and looting because it will become more exciting

2yr
Eggcellent
EggcellentAuthor

Hello there! I am the author, and hopefully you will find as much enjoyment from reading this book as I had writing it! I already wrote quite a few chapters, and I have planned most of the storyline already, so hopefully there will be few inconsistencies. Besides, I write for fun and possess above-average grammar, so feel free to check it out :) Happy reading to all of you!

3yr
RavenMaster
RavenMasterLv2

Amazing start Hopefully, the main character will not give up his swordsmanship and body refining path It would be awesome to see a strong necromancer who can actually fight alongside his summons :D

2yr
God_Of_Wolves
God_Of_WolvesLv14

With Necromancers their biggest weakness besides a few select ones like Sung Jin Woo and Yean woo from second life ranker, the ones that can fight are the real strong ones. Love where this is going with the knight background. Loved your Body Refining Magnus so this must be just as good.

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BlackSwordman1234
BlackSwordman1234Lv14

I’ll give you a 5 star review as I liked the cover art. Maybe not much of inspiration, but it is what it is. Better than nothing I always say.

2yr
L_Dome1
L_Dome1Lv4

Nice story as a fan of WMW i strongly approve. 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

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black_dark
black_darkLv2

An interesting novel, but the problem is that the author does not update for very long periods, which makes you lose the atmosphere of work 🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅

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