A very beautiful novel, I enjoyed it so much that I suddenly found myself reaching the last chapter without realizing it. The novel is very great, but there are some things that I wish the writer would focus on. If he really did that, the level of the novel would greatly increase. This thing is to make the hero focus and give great attention to the subject of experiences of all kinds. Try to delve into the experiences. It is okay to waste dozens of chapters. Or even hundreds of chapters for one experience. This will make the novel delve into its field (the wizarding world) The current way in which the hero advances. I did not like that it is very superficial. Most of the time, time jumps, and this is a very big mistake. You must make the hero delve into ways to increase his strength. The viewer must Watching the progress of the hero step by step, this will make the viewers love the novel madly. The viewer will have a passion for the novel, which increases its popularity . I hope my comment was useful to you, thank you ❤❤❤
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I appreciate the advice!
