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2021-08-16 01:30

the story had a great beginning but my only problem is the fact that for one,the Mc quirk hurts him whenever he uses it while other people can get hurt by their quirks it is only when the over use them and the author said he wanted the mc to work for his place in the world he is 8 and not only that he has the mc as an 8 year old in school with the main cast as 14 so that makes no sense because it should have been that he had a few years to train his terrible quirk. he is almost worse then deku in season 1 it had potential but the author nerfed him bad to "not make it easy" well you did a great job of that I mean he is an 8 year old kid rises in the wild with no real clue to the outside world and he has quirk that rips him apart every time he uses it and he is,once again, an 8 year old in highschool with older kids who,with the exception of deku, have trained their quirks so they don't hurt themselves. so my biggest problem is it feels like he nerfed the mc too much to the point it will just be him half dead half the time.

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ForgeCoffee
ForgeCoffeeLv14

its not that it was nerfed it was more like it was too out of place? Everything just seemed more like "Just roll with it" plot Talks like an adult, lived in a tribe but has amazing speech overall, etc those little things ruin the immersion of it

Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6

That is all so stupid. Even in Naruto it never hurt the user. Plus the whole point of MHA stories are to be with the characters but if he’s s young that takes away from the story.

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