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ZoneTailLv53yr
2021-07-23 15:42

▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆○○○ - the mc has some godly plot armor. for a very strick world, he was able to commit murder (massacre), and was able to get away with it (with the most lamest excuse). and the response of the students and teachers(the school) be like: me we don't care. ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆○○○ - character Design is good. - his behaviour and personality sucks. ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆○

The Bone Hero, Jokara

Wilna_Kapp
4.4
75 Chs

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Sindria_0639
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Red_Roman
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This story is okay if you want to read something cool while shutting your brain down. Now, if you want a story to properly engage with, character growth, interesting narratives, etc...then don't bother, look elsewhere.

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TwistedUExile
TwistedUExileLv15

Well this shit is fire i like the mc personality a lot it makes thing pretty instreting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Doucette
DoucetteLv15

Honestly story is great but problem is u waste chapter and make story lose its unique way. I like it but don't like waste chapter. Use notice in author comment or beginner of chapter

3yr
Apathetic_Reviewer
Apathetic_ReviewerLv2

Everything was great but the constant intervinig of the author, every chapter there has to be some irrelevant story that has nothing to do with the novel, i'm still annoyed at the whole recipe monologue Also there irreleavnt chapters involved that would announce something or would as us to decide basic things, as one point i assumed he was asking as to write the novel for him/her, but apart from that everything was great, the character personality, the side characters, the way he approached problem etc

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_Kaitlin_
_Kaitlin_Lv5

Wow … This. Was. An. Awesome. Book! Any ways thanks for writing it author. Even if the last chapter was like an epilogue to wrap it up fast, you did it!

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manny0101
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Amazingly written fanfic. MC is ruthless and doesn't care about others' opion of him. He will do what he feels is right because he has the power to be like that. Great job!!

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Kaguya_otsutsukii
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Its a good fan fic I like it ....................................................................................................................................................................................

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