Review Detail of Lonewo1f in Welcome To Terminus

This is my honest opinion after reading few chapters. The concept is good. Not the best but surely good because of the pair ~ Ashton and Matt. The conversations are funny between them and one can enjoy while reading. Parallelly, the author also tries to induce the world details in between and the character's growth too as the chapters proceeds. The author has a nice way to show interactions. They are flowy, engaging, and are filled with enough humor. Overall, it was a nice read. Cons (According to me): I couldn't read the synopsis. It was preventing me from reading your work. A synopsis must contain vital details and should be very intriguing cause this is the deciding factor that will make readers whether they want to read or not. And, when I saw the synopsis, I almost dropped your work. Secondly, grammatical errors. I found many of them. I can ignore the punctuations but errors in grammar are a bit too much. So, those need to be fixed. Keep up the good work!! This work has potential. You just need to fix some things and you are good to go.