This story has bad grammar, to the point where it’s hard to read. Also, the main character is one of the most edgiest characters I’ve ever read and has no motive besides aimless killing.

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This is the worst fanfiction I have ever read. You want to make him into an edgy villain fine BUT, I think you don't know what a villain means in all those reference's you mentioned. In most stories even the villains have a motive or goal that drives them into being on the opposite side of their society. A backstory normally a tragic one that forces then into being a villain thats what makes them so likeable. Now what you did with your MC is not make him a villain but just trash. This sorry excuse of a character is trash just fot the sake of being trash, no motive or goal, no backstory or event that shapes him and drives him. This MC is not a villain he's just a sorry excuse of a person and a character and you as the author probably wanted to make something unique in this trash ff world but your trash as well for even writing this. Bad writing and wanting to get better is one thing but if you yourself is already like this? Whatever I can tell your probably a serial killer at heart and needed to vent since you cant kill for real. Just remove this and yourself from site please

The MC doesnt really seem to have a reason or a motive for indiscriminately killing and raping, except for the fact that he finds it interesting. The part where he says he regrets being the one who started WW3 and trying to leave that situation to him then wanting to overturn the hero society and causing deaths just for the fun of it or cus he finds it interesting....??? That doesn’t really make any sense to me. I don’t see where him becoming a heroic villain is shown. He just seems like an OP Shigaraki w/o the mental instability and with assasination experience. Maybe if instead of ‘motivating’ the future heroes by killing and raping he could have cruelly killed those who ‘deserve it’. Like the corrupt heroes or those behind the original hosts’ fate or actual villains. I’ll admit that I didnt get far in the book but this is the impression i get so far. And it will be the farthest im going get into this book. Personally, it’s not for me.

It got boring tbh, the MC legit has no goal. He keeps killing more and more people, including innocents and children, but all for what? At first he said that we wanted world peace, then he started killing anyone for money. Very inconsistent.

Mc is an hypocritical edgy teen that tries to justify himself killing and torturing children, while his abilities get nerfed randomly trying to make an interesting story after making him invincible.

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this is not about the story but i just love how half of the reviews are eww its so disgusting and it just aimless killing an the other half is like best fanfic 10/10 fanfic of the decade never seen a villain fanfic in my life the reviews are just amaizing