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DuchessKolslaw
DuchessKolslawLv112yr
2022-12-27 05:40

Lily cucking her husband and not caring about him. She already chose Snape when she told James he can leave through the door if he doesn't want a polygamous relationship. James should just ask for a divorce. The fact the author let the readers chose her Harem route was a huge mistake. The author wrote it all out in a poor scenario also. Just ruined the novel for me.

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GG_Slayer
GG_SlayerLv4

the mc having an harem is ok but a side character having one with 2 people is not okay

DuchessKolslaw
DuchessKolslawLv11

The difference is James is not okay with being in a Harem.

GG_Slayer:the mc having an harem is ok but a side character having one with 2 people is not okay
GG_Slayer
GG_SlayerLv4

He should leave then

DuchessKolslaw:The difference is James is not okay with being in a Harem.
SrCuervo
SrCuervoLv4

Hi, I'm writing an HP Fanfaction, it would help me a lot if you read it and comment what you think, you can find it on my profile or look for it as: Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet.

The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4

SrCuervo:Hi, I'm writing an HP Fanfaction, it would help me a lot if you read it and comment what you think, you can find it on my profile or look for it as: Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet.
darangelortiz
darangelortizLv14

The issue with that is that like in real life you would have that conversation early in the relationship not after you are married and with kids because that would be an absolutely horrid thing to do to your partner or have done to you if the book can’ t use common sense and logic then it is objectively a bad book

GG_Slayer:the mc having an harem is ok but a side character having one with 2 people is not okay
GG_Slayer
GG_SlayerLv4

People can have a change of mind 💀💀💀💀and why bring the kids here they're adults by now 💀💀💀

darangelortiz:The issue with that is that like in real life you would have that conversation early in the relationship not after you are married and with kids because that would be an absolutely horrid thing to do to your partner or have done to you if the book can’ t use common sense and logic then it is objectively a bad book
Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

Que trama más innecesaria, hubiera traído a la vida a los dos, Lily podría haber pedido que revivieran a James, pero no, que repugnante, detesto la infidelidad, porque técnicamente todavía estaban casados.

DuchessKolslaw
DuchessKolslawLv11

Uhh English?

Santy_Melay:Que trama más innecesaria, hubiera traído a la vida a los dos, Lily podría haber pedido que revivieran a James, pero no, que repugnante, detesto la infidelidad, porque técnicamente todavía estaban casados.
khazar
khazarLv5

in real life your husband wouldn't be dead for a century a come back in middle of you relationship.

darangelortiz:The issue with that is that like in real life you would have that conversation early in the relationship not after you are married and with kids because that would be an absolutely horrid thing to do to your partner or have done to you if the book can’ t use common sense and logic then it is objectively a bad book
DarkFlame69
DarkFlame69Lv4

Good point

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