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2021-11-30 09:21

This fic did have potential but it just isnt good. The author barely changes canon and the mc is extremely passive. Then the MC is betrothed and going to be leading the armies to be king so something that you know is different from canon. NOPE. He is now thought to be “dead” while he is lost at sea after his ship gets destroyed lol honestly it had a chance to be at least decent but it isnt

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Would re rate this to 1/5 because of the pathetic passive mc that bends the knee and accepts to become daenerys hand lol dude has 4 dragons and visions of a “Storm King” and he just bends the knee just like that? Do not waste your time on this garbage fic. This fic is a complete waste of time.

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