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Luohuo
LuohuoLv141yr
2023-10-22 18:10

Really good novel, but author please increase the update chapter. even though this novel per chapter words is bigger then most of the top novels, but one chapter a day and sometime no chapter (i know you have issues since i see your comments) really is a demerit to this novel. It really is such a great harem novel and kind of like the best harem novel with the most chadest mc i have ever read. I am personally only like the action (including training part with scarlett sisters) aspect of the story (whether it is the wives who are fighting or mc) but with wives and lovers such as Victoria (really feels like an extra to complete familydon), (Lacus and Siena; i really do not understand why these two got added in the harem but i get pepper ), Demon generals who ended up getting alucard name but we saw no ritual or even a hint of snu snu with them. I hope you keep on continue the novel for two years at least. i felt like you were rushing the entire Greek war (which i thought would be a really major arc with hundred plus chap but it got concluded in like fifteen chap?) Samar arc felt like it went on for a while but at least it gave us the background for entire Samar so i was ok with it. I see Victor became so strong after Greek war and his dragon evolution that i feel all primordial gods just got trivialize, as i remember the war, no primordial god used their true form as they didnt want to destroy the pantheon so that went on Victor's favor as well but i don't even know if the true form of these gods is really that big of an massive upgrade to the power as its not stated anywhere in the novel about their multipliers like how it was done so for the Vampires. Even though the introduction of Emperors and Overlords seems to open the novel to Universal and multi-versal level, but the terminology of Sectors (Low, mid, high), Galaxies, Universes, Cosmos need to be explore further as right now the true extent of power is still in the air and we just don't have a lot of basis to gauge Victor's power anymore. I just feel all the known strongest gods and primordial gods, Victor can fight them all without any issues. I have saw your comments of who could face against Victor would be Odin, Ra, Amaterasu (and her two brothers who were said to be average gods in chapter 0 but now due to Amaterasu feeling a second gen primordial, i assume they are also primordial gods?) and God-king of Elder gods but i just feel like they really wont stand much of a fight (i would love to be wrong as i like fights where mc would need to go absolutely all out to win). Another note on harem, as much as i love big harems but can you please make mc like say no have boundaries and standards to his harem, i really don't like that anyone with a slightest aspect of 'obsession' and 'yandere' aspect will end up in the harem while his other harems like Mizuki, Victoria, the three scarlett sisters, Demon generals gets no good development or personal time with victor at all. I miss the chapters where Victor use to take girls to dates with there one on one time which really does wonder in long terms. Goddesses such as like Lilith, hestia, persephone (may be?), Nyx, gaia,(you hinted Tiamat as well), Dun Scaith (now?), Hera and Rhea (may be?) I have no idea how will u be managing this but i trust you, as i have trusted you to not ruin your novel with the pacing all this time. There is now the Blood god religion as well which has its own fair share of yanderes who totally fits Victors lover criteria. I just dont know if any of them will be his wives or not as its all the air which i really don't like. In the discord, i see that everyone just accepts that all the females who gets named and have even the slightest interest in Victor will be in his harem which just destroys the charm of the novel that was built for like 690+ chapters. Please don't ruin it just for some readers ask that you add this girl or that girl in the harem. I have heard from some people that there will be like 6 more volumes after this and i am very much looking forward to it, so please do your best in each volumes and don't rush story. I would love to see more detailed explanation of Victor's powers and skill sets, its been missing since his blood dragon transformation. Also on another note Please like give a good explanation of Power levels as the one given in chapter 0 is really lackluster for the hype fights this novel had. I hope u read this comment and have a nice day.

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

Victor_Weismann
4.9
1129 Chs

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HegemonDao
HegemonDaoLv11

You literally took words from me. Yes, The novel is the best I have seen so far. Even my standards for other novels Went up. (Which is quite painful) I have no problem with how many girls (Siena, Laucas, Victoria, Lily, Helena etc.) entered the harem. I mean the former three was there when Vic came to Nightingale and even when asked they didn't go. BUT, We didn't get any interaction, Lovey dovey scenes with them. Siena was always reserved with Vic. Acting Tsundere. Yes, They must have bonded in that 1 Year long Snu Snu session. But We never saw that~ So, Author sama, give us some more interactions with these girls. And when again More girls are added (which we obviously want...😏), Give them some quality time with each other. At least One chapter. That way We will understand their current relationship. We can easily describe the first few girls' relationship with Vic. But new ones, we pretty much have no idea about them (of their patterns or ideas or desires) All in all This novel is the best I have ever read. 10000/10. But still need improvements. AND THE MOST IMPORTANT IS YOUR HEALTH. STAY HEALTHY AND HAPPY.

1yr
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Victor_Weismann
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This is my first attempt at making a novel, I hope you guys like it... Yes, I had commented on this in the past, but it was deleted... T_T, I'll just go here as a reminder, sigh. About the novel, give it a try, as it was my first novel, I made a lot of grammatical mistakes in the beginning, but I improved as the volumes went on. I hope you like it.

1yr

Dav0_2138
Dav0_2138Lv15

Shameless Editor’s review! (No spoilers or plot discussion will appear. This is just my opinion on the overall story) I’ve been working on this novel for around 20 months, so a bit over 1 year and 8 months, and I must say that this novel has been a treat to edit. (Started working on this around Chapter 119) The story premise is very interesting, keeping a steady rhythm between detailed character development, plot progression, action, and steamy romance. The story is really enjoyable to the point where editing each chapter has never felt like work. It’s always managed to keep me engaged and anticipating what comes next, never once feeling boring or dragged out. The writing quality of this story is clear, concise, and has little to no errors. (It is my job to make sure that is the case, so it has my editor’s seal of approval!) The world development Author Victor Weismann has created is very in-depth, showcasing various supernatural factions which intertwine and interact to create a vivid world of fantasy hidden beyond the veil of a modern world. The use of real-life mythology and the way the different myths have been woven into the story both enrich the reading experience and work very well with each other to create interesting dynamics that is unique and engaging. Each character is well fleshed out depending on their significance to the plot, rarely, if ever, leaving readers unaware of a character’s traits, background, personality, or who they are as a ”person”. The use of pop culture and a healthy dose of anime/manga references create humorous interactions between characters and aid in defining many of the characters’ traits. (This story is Yandere heaven) With chapters being updated daily, with an average word count of 2000 words per chapter, this novel provides a decent amount of entertainment for everyday reading. And for those of you just starting, with a stockpile of 777 chapters as of writing this review, there’s an entire world for you to binge-read to your hearts content to consume a significant portion of your time to escape your boredom. So why not give it a read?

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DontCallMeSimp
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3 yanderes + cool family + funny maids + crazy mc = good novel .............................................................................

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Lucky_jinx
Lucky_jinxLv4

Yanderes are the best.......................................................................................................................

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Lruska
LruskaLv10

They told me to follow my dreams, so I turned around and continued to sleep. 😴 ..................................................... .......

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Relhak
RelhakLv12

Do you like yanderes? Do you also like the unconditional crazy passionate love that they offer? Do you often wonder what you would do if you suddenly wake up and find yourself married to, not one, not two, but three sexy women? Well, here are 3 beautiful and dangerous yanderes for you to read about. I usually don't give reviews for stories with less than 50 chapters, but for this one, it's an exception. My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires (M3WBV) follows an MC who wakes up after turning into a vampire, and finds out the during the process he is now married to a beautiful vampire, named Violet Snow. So far, there isn't much plot development, except the MC discovering more about the supernatural world that he now has become a part of, and that he also has 2 more wives due to an accident during the vampire conversion process. I foresee great potential with this story, and I hope that the author can deliver. In the first 25 chapters you'll experience sweet romantic moments, intrigue, mystery, and some unique characters. And it's definitely the unique characters and their portrayals that have had me hooked with this story. From the almost-bipolar yandere wife, to the stoic maid, and the MCs over-enthusiastic family - all of their interaction are fun to read, and generally enjoyable. TL;DR: Give this novel a try if you would like read about a good guy, who suddenly finds himself thrust into a marriage between 3 yandere vampires, and want to follow their developments.

3yr
Luohuo
LuohuoLv14

This is like one of the best Yandere harem novels out there in my opinion. We have an mc who was just a typical avg nobody who got thrusted into the world of supernatural by him getting married to his first 3 wives. its journey man, seeing a weak ill guy turn into one of the strongest being, meeting new people, finding out old friends who were also involve with the supernatural world, having cute mother in laws, a lot of oyakodons, witnessing one of the most hated goddess getting character development and turn into one of the best character in the story and helping mc along the way. Mc himself is an extreme yandere for his wives too which was a nice touch in the story, how to tame a harem of yandere? become an even bigger yandere haha. Also this novel has a really big yandere harem with many lovely girls, so enjoy the ride. Final thoughts: as of chapter 777 it has its ups and downs but over all its a fantastic novel.

1yr
iixii
iixiiLv15

Hi Victor, we love youre book keep it up and don't listen to little kiddys who don't like Harem novels go with youre own flow. We love the way you are going with youre novel and because of this we are always on youre side. Im addicted to youre novel ^^. Best wishes from one big Fan [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Dark_Crow_Dao
Dark_Crow_DaoLv14

A novel that i look forward to every release date daily, excellent at everything for me, an MC with a personality and not a SIMP, gorgeous women and with personalities too (mostly Yandere), very good at fighting with enormous capacities. Keep doing a good job.

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