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2021-09-02 13:17

It's complete trash. Don't ever bother reading it. The first few chapters somewhat decent, but afterward just will make you want to throw up. I'm not someone who easily give up reading novels that i already read, cause I'm curious person. Even if it's trashy novel I can somewhat read it, but not this time. It's not even novel. It's just story that has been written by children that hasn't even finish his elementary school education.

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Let me first state, I could only handle reading 15 chapters. Let me also state that the grammar, spelling, and clarity of the writing was excellent. That is the besst praise I can say about the author. The author's style of designing the world is not bad, the overall plot isn't really new, but it is not directly copied either. The characters are very cliche and generic, and they behave so predictably that it's like watching a poorly scripted/acted drama. There are so many cringey aspects of the main character like his name "God Slayer" to his inner thoughts; making him an "I am so awesome, you trash should kiss my feet" kind of character that doesn't actually say it out loud because he wants to be "low-key" and "mysterious". The author also can't seem to make up his mind about numerical values, as he will say "Armor Value: 50" then say, "That is 75 armor", or he will give a value for damage and go back and forth between 20 and 30. The overall writing style also doesn't properly describe combat or any scene details, it feels like the only substance is the characters peacock displays of his reputation with the village inhabitants, or him thinking about how awesome he is compared to everyone around him because of his op skills. Oh yeah this is an OP-super character that breaks any kind of balance around him with Turing any passive skill he finds to a max value; Bonus Exp 5% become Bonus Exp 200%, chance to block physical attack 5% becomes 100%, return 10% damage back to enemies becomes 200%. Its OP and it's just going to get worse. Can't read the story due to lack of interesting story or decent immersive descriptions. Just feels like a play-by-play of a boring game log.

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