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KazeelBaYz
KazeelBaYzLv133yr
2021-08-06 17:49

From what I can read at the moment , this novel is pretty well written. Of course, it's not heaven defying good or anything, however, the plot or at least the way the story seems to be going, it's already better than half of the novels that started with their "So called-perfect school goddess" who I might add, are attracted to the Mc for no good or reasonable reason.

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Ximen_Chuixue
Ximen_ChuixueLv5

You don't need a reason to be attracted to someone though.

Axes
AxesLv5

While true, most of the time people are only attracted to someone with the same social status as them. Popular student with popular student. While this does not always apply as your boy right here (ME) has dated a school princess and I was so suprised she liked me🤣 She ended up getting jealous because I was the funny-nuce guy and talked to everyone and broke up with me when I could not spend time with her one weekend and then I ended up losimg my virginity like 3 hours later by some girl consoling me because I was sad.🤣

Ximen_Chuixue:You don't need a reason to be attracted to someone though.
Sticky_Finger
Sticky_FingerLv6

noice

Axes:While true, most of the time people are only attracted to someone with the same social status as them. Popular student with popular student. While this does not always apply as your boy right here (ME) has dated a school princess and I was so suprised she liked me🤣 She ended up getting jealous because I was the funny-nuce guy and talked to everyone and broke up with me when I could not spend time with her one weekend and then I ended up losimg my virginity like 3 hours later by some girl consoling me because I was sad.🤣
CoffeeCandy
CoffeeCandyLv6

Nice ! What is the title of that novel?

Axes:While true, most of the time people are only attracted to someone with the same social status as them. Popular student with popular student. While this does not always apply as your boy right here (ME) has dated a school princess and I was so suprised she liked me🤣 She ended up getting jealous because I was the funny-nuce guy and talked to everyone and broke up with me when I could not spend time with her one weekend and then I ended up losimg my virginity like 3 hours later by some girl consoling me because I was sad.🤣
Axes
AxesLv5

What novel?

CoffeeCandy:Nice ! What is the title of that novel?
Anant_Tripathi
Anant_TripathiLv10

7j

Anant_Tripathi
Anant_TripathiLv10

खॅटटषखhhyo

Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

You’re not wrong but the issue is some people do have reasons that can be named and they are very problematic ones.

Ximen_Chuixue:You don't need a reason to be attracted to someone though.
Spare_
Spare_Lv14

Haha i think he might have been making a joke bout how your life is a novel, or maybe hea just a little confused

Axes:What novel?
Axes
AxesLv5

Ohhhhh lol makes sense. I feel dumb now. It went straight over my head.

Spare_:Haha i think he might have been making a joke bout how your life is a novel, or maybe hea just a little confused
Confused404
Confused404Lv15

News flash: you may be a popular kid

Axes:While true, most of the time people are only attracted to someone with the same social status as them. Popular student with popular student. While this does not always apply as your boy right here (ME) has dated a school princess and I was so suprised she liked me🤣 She ended up getting jealous because I was the funny-nuce guy and talked to everyone and broke up with me when I could not spend time with her one weekend and then I ended up losimg my virginity like 3 hours later by some girl consoling me because I was sad.🤣
Axes
AxesLv5

Hahahahaha that made me laugh quite a lot. I wish. At most I was the average side character who had friends in all clicks/friend groups.

Confused404:News flash: you may be a popular kid
Nanohana
NanohanaLv2

Can someone recommend me some good novels? Im on the hunt for something like library of heavens path

Duncan_Morin
Duncan_MorinLv3

Of all the stories that never happened this is one of my favourites

Axes:While true, most of the time people are only attracted to someone with the same social status as them. Popular student with popular student. While this does not always apply as your boy right here (ME) has dated a school princess and I was so suprised she liked me🤣 She ended up getting jealous because I was the funny-nuce guy and talked to everyone and broke up with me when I could not spend time with her one weekend and then I ended up losimg my virginity like 3 hours later by some girl consoling me because I was sad.🤣
Axes
AxesLv5

It did happen though. I am not lying. Her name was Madison and she said that she liked someone with last name that started with a T, there was me and my buddy. Then her friends asked her and she liked me, so I went and asked her out and she said yea. The second part of the story is because I had to work the next morning (cutting grass) and she wanted to hang out at the skating rink, she broke up with me (I almost cried) and then that other girl was like come here, I got something to show you. So I went into her room and she closed the door, I sat on her bed and she sat next to me and then leaned in and kissed me on the cheek, i looked at her and she stared at me in the eyes and then she kissed me on the lips and it progressed from there. I didn’t have a rubber, so she want to her brothers room and get one from his drawer (it was a extra large😭 it didn’t fit all that good but it worked.)

Duncan_Morin:Of all the stories that never happened this is one of my favourites
kawaiiinow
kawaiiinowLv10

Wonder how you feel comfortable telling strangers this...

Axes:It did happen though. I am not lying. Her name was Madison and she said that she liked someone with last name that started with a T, there was me and my buddy. Then her friends asked her and she liked me, so I went and asked her out and she said yea. The second part of the story is because I had to work the next morning (cutting grass) and she wanted to hang out at the skating rink, she broke up with me (I almost cried) and then that other girl was like come here, I got something to show you. So I went into her room and she closed the door, I sat on her bed and she sat next to me and then leaned in and kissed me on the cheek, i looked at her and she stared at me in the eyes and then she kissed me on the lips and it progressed from there. I didn’t have a rubber, so she want to her brothers room and get one from his drawer (it was a extra large😭 it didn’t fit all that good but it worked.)
Axes
AxesLv5

I am a open book man, I don’t feel embarrassed about things like this. It actually helps boost my confidence and communication in some cases. It also helps you improvise in conversations or come up with jokes because you are more open.

kawaiiinow:Wonder how you feel comfortable telling strangers this...
kawaiiinow
kawaiiinowLv10

hmm I see

Axes:I am a open book man, I don’t feel embarrassed about things like this. It actually helps boost my confidence and communication in some cases. It also helps you improvise in conversations or come up with jokes because you are more open.
G1LGAMESH
G1LGAMESHLv14

Rip last part

Axes:It did happen though. I am not lying. Her name was Madison and she said that she liked someone with last name that started with a T, there was me and my buddy. Then her friends asked her and she liked me, so I went and asked her out and she said yea. The second part of the story is because I had to work the next morning (cutting grass) and she wanted to hang out at the skating rink, she broke up with me (I almost cried) and then that other girl was like come here, I got something to show you. So I went into her room and she closed the door, I sat on her bed and she sat next to me and then leaned in and kissed me on the cheek, i looked at her and she stared at me in the eyes and then she kissed me on the lips and it progressed from there. I didn’t have a rubber, so she want to her brothers room and get one from his drawer (it was a extra large😭 it didn’t fit all that good but it worked.)
Axes
AxesLv5

true😭

G1LGAMESH:Rip last part
Other Reviews
Dzarc
DzarcLv14

Let me first state, I could only handle reading 15 chapters. Let me also state that the grammar, spelling, and clarity of the writing was excellent. That is the besst praise I can say about the author. The author's style of designing the world is not bad, the overall plot isn't really new, but it is not directly copied either. The characters are very cliche and generic, and they behave so predictably that it's like watching a poorly scripted/acted drama. There are so many cringey aspects of the main character like his name "God Slayer" to his inner thoughts; making him an "I am so awesome, you trash should kiss my feet" kind of character that doesn't actually say it out loud because he wants to be "low-key" and "mysterious". The author also can't seem to make up his mind about numerical values, as he will say "Armor Value: 50" then say, "That is 75 armor", or he will give a value for damage and go back and forth between 20 and 30. The overall writing style also doesn't properly describe combat or any scene details, it feels like the only substance is the characters peacock displays of his reputation with the village inhabitants, or him thinking about how awesome he is compared to everyone around him because of his op skills. Oh yeah this is an OP-super character that breaks any kind of balance around him with Turing any passive skill he finds to a max value; Bonus Exp 5% become Bonus Exp 200%, chance to block physical attack 5% becomes 100%, return 10% damage back to enemies becomes 200%. Its OP and it's just going to get worse. Can't read the story due to lack of interesting story or decent immersive descriptions. Just feels like a play-by-play of a boring game log.

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