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InvicibleGod
InvicibleGodLv63yr
2021-09-02 11:37

garbage beyond garbage you can replace the mc with ANYBODY even noob players and they would do just as well a person with a brain would do 1000000 times better the worst thing is this mc, is so pretentious and hypocritical that you really cant stand him for a few chapters and the more you read the more you want to reincarnate and kill him yourself he should be in the top 5 most pretentious & hypocritical mc in the history of novels

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InvicibleGod
InvicibleGodLv6

forgot to add delusional

Swordsman923
Swordsman923Lv11

I think you misunderstand, the mc is a noob. After all, his previous name was Inconspicuous Dirt and was someone who was just cannon fodder.

ReaderLove
ReaderLoveLv14

A noob nonetheless but he still have future knowledge of 30 year or whatever year. That could be used to help him become stronger. But no, author don't know how to write progression or any system nor how to move the story along when Mc is op.

Swordsman923:I think you misunderstand, the mc is a noob. After all, his previous name was Inconspicuous Dirt and was someone who was just cannon fodder.
NexIzich
NexIzichLv15

From what I read he is using knowledge from his past to progress fast tho

ReaderLove:A noob nonetheless but he still have future knowledge of 30 year or whatever year. That could be used to help him become stronger. But no, author don't know how to write progression or any system nor how to move the story along when Mc is op.
Dennis_Wadford
Dennis_WadfordLv15

There's at least 100 chapters that arent even necessary where the author sends him to a "parallel world" when its clear he went back in time.

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Dzarc
DzarcLv14

Let me first state, I could only handle reading 15 chapters. Let me also state that the grammar, spelling, and clarity of the writing was excellent. That is the besst praise I can say about the author. The author's style of designing the world is not bad, the overall plot isn't really new, but it is not directly copied either. The characters are very cliche and generic, and they behave so predictably that it's like watching a poorly scripted/acted drama. There are so many cringey aspects of the main character like his name "God Slayer" to his inner thoughts; making him an "I am so awesome, you trash should kiss my feet" kind of character that doesn't actually say it out loud because he wants to be "low-key" and "mysterious". The author also can't seem to make up his mind about numerical values, as he will say "Armor Value: 50" then say, "That is 75 armor", or he will give a value for damage and go back and forth between 20 and 30. The overall writing style also doesn't properly describe combat or any scene details, it feels like the only substance is the characters peacock displays of his reputation with the village inhabitants, or him thinking about how awesome he is compared to everyone around him because of his op skills. Oh yeah this is an OP-super character that breaks any kind of balance around him with Turing any passive skill he finds to a max value; Bonus Exp 5% become Bonus Exp 200%, chance to block physical attack 5% becomes 100%, return 10% damage back to enemies becomes 200%. Its OP and it's just going to get worse. Can't read the story due to lack of interesting story or decent immersive descriptions. Just feels like a play-by-play of a boring game log.

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