Author here with the shameless review, no questions need to be asked how I feel about the story. I’m still working on it so Wish ya boy luck along the way. For those wanting to read it, give it a try, if you don’t like it let me know. If you love it let me know, every comment and review helps me get better so thank you.

Writing quality : 5 Updating stability : 5 Story development : 5 Character deaign : 5 World background : 5 So far i like this novel leep up good work. And i know what kinda ability he can make 😁 and i know where my stones are going now.

This is my rating for this book. Please I'm begging you don't drop every other Star wars fanfic on this site has been dropped or has such a slow update it feels as though it is.

The concept is interesting and i Would love more of the story XoxooxxxoxooxoxoppxpppxpxxppccpcccppcpcøudlfløhæjuduædyøuædjzøhzøøhzlhzlhlgzøhøhdhøshlsmggmGmmhzmhMhsmhdhmdhmhmdmymtmysmywylwlgsmgsmhjjdmjdjmdmhdhmjmj

only one negative i got. slow updates. everything else is awesome, off the charts, 5 star. I like the sources of inspiration, the mix of elf/dwarf mytho with star wars. main characters stance, morality, ingenuity. hopefully you keep this story going, a pa-treon site should help motivate you to speed up updates, id pay.

Its a good book but not what i was expecting but partially my fault for hyping the book up there was a lot of thing the author could have done to make the book more enticing but Maybe thats just my imagination going wild at least in my mind he could have went a diffirent route To make a more impactful story.

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Buen capitulo e, espero que lo sigas continuando, todo el mundo caerá ante tus pies. Una pregunta iras a al planeta de anakin para terraformarla?

sou brasileiro e fiquei muito interessado em sua historia, por isso adicionei ela na minha biblioteca para ler quando tiver mais capítulos