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AppleyGod
AppleyGodLv103yr
2021-12-21 09:29

Author got to chapter 36 and decided "yeah, this is where I'll ruin the story." The MC's stupid mother gets herself killed, and then the father, KNOWING HE'LL DIE 100%, goes and does the same thing and dies pointlessly. Then, the MC and his sister also almost die and the LEADER OF THE ENEMY comes and says not to kill them or they won't have a work force. Horrible plot armor, even for a Webnovel. So lame. Would've been great to just have the mother die. Side note, the grammar is bad. There's a few slip-ups every few chapters, messing up entire words or changing pronouns.

My Idle Gaming System

Adui
3.9
352 Chs

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Pacific_Hand
Pacific_HandLv1

Hm. What time is it now? Time to read Think out of the box!

3yr
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Adui
AduiAuthor

Hi everyone ! The novel [My Idle Gaming System] is a story revolving around Noah Eckert, a naive transmigrator that gradually learns to be ruthless and cunning as he goes through ordeals in the world (Realm) he transmigrated in as he experiences the ruthlessness of the larger Universe he’s in. It will not be a harem like my other novel that is in the same Multiverse as this novel! You can expect a fun ride of fantastical worlds and realms, with powerful beings casting skills we can only think of in our wildest imaginations. Of course, the overpowered system behind it all- the Idle Gaming System, will be explored throughout. It’s fairly fast-paced as my other work, with the two stories actually colliding in the future as in my next few projects, we’ll be watching the main characters of this Multiverse come together for something beautiful! I wish everyone an amazing day, and even more amazing next few years as we build wonderful fantastical worlds ^.^ Happy binge reading!

3yr

Elastic
ElasticLv5

Not really a review. Just been following Ur other novel for a long time so just giving it a 5⭐️ for supp.

3yr
PunchedHaddock5
PunchedHaddock5Lv15

Simply put if you like OP protagonists then our favorite author here is the perfect person. Love the work and can’t wait for another one of a kind OP mc.

3yr
Littlezoid
LittlezoidLv15

Reveal spoiler

3yr
WaitWhoWhat
WaitWhoWhatLv14

Reveal spoiler

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Made
MadeLv12

It's average at best. The characters and the world are bland and uninspiring. MC is boring and two dimensional. The plot seems like something that has been done a million times before. Read if you have read everything else on the site would not recommend.

3yr
Unknownsmk
UnknownsmkLv11

No just No, when I read this it felt so bad to the point i would re-read the most boring book in the world than read this is he so dumb to the point where hes going to be a test subject or killed. I wouldnrsther trust a 5yr kid then him with a secret than thr MC,like who tells the family "oh im going to be really strong out of know where when I dont have no powers anx im really lazy , oh yes thats not wierd at all ok son thats good to know" like really in almost spit out my drink for reading that. *this is just an opinion also the total rating is 1/5

3yr
Joeboon
JoeboonLv10

Extremely mediocre book. It's legible so it's better than a lot of stories on here, but everything else is kind of a mess. Every other sentence ends in an exclamation point to try and create fake excitement. Please stop saying "RUMBLE!" in completely random spots that make zero sense.

3yr
AncientGodDragon
AncientGodDragonLv5

The author's other book wasn't half bad so i wonder how did he suddenly manage to write this one out of thin air. I would like to use many adjectives to describe it but just know that its a waste of time.

3yr
Shanro_Arkneds
Shanro_ArknedsLv1

Seems to be a good novel. But not my taste. I found nothing original in the plot. Mc's incessant screaming and reactions and those capitalized words kinda put me off. I don't know why but something just feels off about this novel. I just felt like skimming through chapters without actual reading in details.

3yr
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