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MadeLv123yr
2021-07-15 05:59

It's average at best. The characters and the world are bland and uninspiring. MC is boring and two dimensional. The plot seems like something that has been done a million times before. Read if you have read everything else on the site would not recommend.

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pacul
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well, considering his other works, it's another recycling of an already recycled story

ElG0hary
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true 100 chapters yet only 5 character where 2 died already

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