Review Detail of athass_prkr in Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)
Review detail
I am giving the story five stars because ... well everybody does it. I don't understand the ranking and power stuff on this website but whatever idc. I get inspired by a lot of fanfics that I only remember a few plot points from. The prologue is pretty much copied from "Rise of Arcane" from FF . net as a starting point. I adapted it for my use. If you catch any idea I used taken from another FF, tell me to properly give them credit. The plot is essentially already planned out. But I can make some modifications if I think I’ll need them. The story is about a girl who dies and is reborn as Jasmine Potter. She accidentally goes back in time and goes on adventures then. It’s gonna be a mix between the current plot (1990s) and the flashbacks. I got the idea from “A Long Way Home” also on FF. I'm doing this for fun and to improve my writing (speed and quality), if you don't like it just don't read it but try to be respectful please.
Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)
athass_prkr
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I'm not gonna spoil the story but I can only say that it will surprise you. By the way if you're insistent, reply with 10 names and if it's one of them I'll delete your comment.
RikySmith123:who's the love interest
I haven't read it yet, just wanted to recommend looking for a unique cover picture because thus far I hadn't noticed this was a new publication as a lot of mcu Potter crossovers use the same cover image... It might help you gain more readers by finding something appealing that's rarely used. I recommend looking at bestselling books of a genre you like, and finding a harry potter verse related image that is roughly simular for your fanfic. Good for thought
no offense author but the way the girl backstory was turned tragic was just a sorry attempt to write some contrived bs she got all that just because of misunderstanding fine but lily should get her mental stability back and since she never was shown any good reason to treat the mc that way (meaning she is not evil lily in this universe and no i am calling bs on the fact they couldn't and wouldn't contact her one way or another and let her suffer (which doesn't make sense because james lily lupin even sirius wouldn't forget and forgive petunia and her family in case they get to see her just once and in an off chance they will figure out all the abuse (especially sirius since he was raised in an abused home) that even original harry potter could go through but our oh so weak little op dead mc couldn't in short all of it just feels so forced and out of place like author already telling the heroine name then all the encounters she get with mc is nothing but a pathetic attempt to justify the inevitable love she would end up having for the mc no matter what mc does make sense or not i will come back later a few months or half a year if it exists then and what people say about it then
Havent read so im guessing its at harrys time Luna, Hermoine, Astoria, yeah thats all i can think about
athass_prkr:I'm not gonna spoil the story but I can only say that it will surprise you. By the way if you're insistent, reply with 10 names and if it's one of them I'll delete your comment.
CasualDegenerate:Havent read so im guessing its at harrys time Luna, Hermoine, Astoria, yeah thats all i can think about
athass_prkr:I'm not gonna spoil the story but I can only say that it will surprise you. By the way if you're insistent, reply with 10 names and if it's one of them I'll delete your comment.
wanda, wanda, wanda, wanda, wanda, wanda, wanda, wanda, wanda, wanda hehehe just joking i dont even know
athass_prkr:I'm not gonna spoil the story but I can only say that it will surprise you. By the way if you're insistent, reply with 10 names and if it's one of them I'll delete your comment.
athass_prkr:I'm not gonna spoil the story but I can only say that it will surprise you. By the way if you're insistent, reply with 10 names and if it's one of them I'll delete your comment.
athass_prkr:I'm not gonna spoil the story but I can only say that it will surprise you. By the way if you're insistent, reply with 10 names and if it's one of them I'll delete your comment.