Overall: The story is quite captivating. It's one that promises action and adventure. I love the main protagonist. And I also like the exchange between the colleagues. It makes it more relaxing. That said, I've noticed some subtle errors that you may need to correct. Most of them are typos. For example instead of *at* you write as. And ommision as well. But these aren't enough to dampen the story
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