Review Detail of LordEggar in An Ordinary Traveler Who Meets Every One Extraordinary

Eeeeh, I'll be honest, the grammatical errors and broken English make it hard for me to read through. I've only got as far as the first chapter, but I think that if the author was to work on their technical writing ability it could be a lot better. Would love to see what it could be if it was reworked or if the author had a more literate editor to aid them.