Hi, the author here. my dumb self made a huge mistake by messing up the update order so pl read little brother of 2 part 4 before labyrinth 1, thank you and sorry. ( ignore this comment if the order is fixed)

It's a fun read I kinda liked the author notes in the middle of the story feels like I am reading along with the author, [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Hi, this is the author giving a biased review to celebrate longer chapters because I put a lot of effort into them, this is just self-appreciation.

thank you for your honest review. i am still learning this is my first novel and I am trying to do better.

it is a very poetic work ,well executed ,i personally would prefer a simpler book but thats just me and nothing on the author .[img=recommend]

it is well written and it brings out the emotions of the reader. good work overall [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

the first chapter is very beautifully written the story's narration is pleasing to read. overall has a peasant feel to it[img=recommend][img=recommend]

this review is for the first chapter only the story is well written with a good pace of events. the story seems fun keep up the good work 👍

so this review is only for upto chapter 6 it's a little slow paced for my liking it's probably just me and the protagonists seems plain but that's just my opinion and there maybe development in the later chapters

YES ITS THE AUTHOR I am going to give my self some appreciation for the hard work I did writing this novel despite having a mountain of work graciously given to me by school

this is a very well written story. never thought a sword could be such a cool mc and just how many forms does he have ? by the end of the story I wouldn't be shocked to see around 50 froms.

only the comic adaption was missing and here it is now i have no clue how many times am i going to see, read etc the same story without getting bored.i just love this so much i cant say no to anything related

i am out of power stones but if i had i would give it this chap loved it and are the younger ones spying on there bros ?

poor guy

didn't he alredy do it???

what thoughts are you thinking about hmmm.....

wow sooooo many annoying people at once

i am commenting and voting because game master said so

this is soooooooo good I am in love the mc's narration of food did make me a little hungry hehe. the mc interactions with the system and brother are just so sweet

this way too early to review as there aren't much details about the mc or the world but poor mc can't wait for his evil awakening kekeke and the war setting is awesome will be waiting for more updates