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Bird_Of_Paradise
Bird_Of_ParadiseAuthor3yr
2021-06-28 17:35

The author decided to review the novel herself🙂...Don't mind this shameless side of me😂 And I want all of my readers to appreciate what I am doing 😗if its not too much to ask..I wil be thankful if i get your suggestions and feedbacks on how am i doing🤗 Thank you for checking this out 😁

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Algebra1
Algebra1Lv2

Work well. I am positive about this work😁

nana_alcelinia
nana_alceliniaLv1

How many chapters do you plan on every part?

Bird_Of_Paradise
Bird_Of_ParadiseAuthor

around 3 or 4 at most...tho i have the whole line ready...things changes at some point 😅

nana_alcelinia:How many chapters do you plan on every part?
nana_alcelinia
nana_alceliniaLv1

Why the chapter update is so messed up

Bird_Of_Paradise
Bird_Of_ParadiseAuthor

I messed up and lost the half of stocks...😓So Imma trying to replace them with new...I m sorry abt this ..Its just irl stuffs jst messed up😓😓

nana_alcelinia:Why the chapter update is so messed up
Cursed_sin
Cursed_sinLv13

Can u spoil who she ends up with I don’ want to root to for the wrong guy and get all sad It is one guy right? Also does the shady contract Lon shark BS get cleared up quick? I’m sorry for the trouble

Bird_Of_Paradise:I messed up and lost the half of stocks...😓So Imma trying to replace them with new...I m sorry abt this ..Its just irl stuffs jst messed up😓😓
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Bird_Of_Paradise
Bird_Of_ParadiseAuthor

Yep..it gets all settled. As for who she ends up with...umm...its Ryan..as for yhe loan shark...she and Liam have a long history traced to their childhood uwu😅

Cursed_sin:Can u spoil who she ends up with I don’ want to root to for the wrong guy and get all sad It is one guy right? Also does the shady contract Lon shark BS get cleared up quick? I’m sorry for the trouble
Bird_Of_Paradise
Bird_Of_ParadiseAuthor

also..no trouble at all...Happy to answet queries 😚

Cursed_sin:Can u spoil who she ends up with I don’ want to root to for the wrong guy and get all sad It is one guy right? Also does the shady contract Lon shark BS get cleared up quick? I’m sorry for the trouble
Pretty_Blue_Shell
Pretty_Blue_ShellLv15

It was a great story, but so many typos and misspellings I almost could not understand parts of it. Also, the side story is kinda depressing. But a great ending!

Bird_Of_Paradise
Bird_Of_ParadiseAuthor

XD...it was my first try at writing ...and midway I felt demotivated🙈But comments like these helped me improve now and complete this novel . thank you for sticking till the end🙈Ly❤

Pretty_Blue_Shell:It was a great story, but so many typos and misspellings I almost could not understand parts of it. Also, the side story is kinda depressing. But a great ending!
The_Fallen_Writer
The_Fallen_WriterLv4

Bird_Of_Paradise:I messed up and lost the half of stocks...😓So Imma trying to replace them with new...I m sorry abt this ..Its just irl stuffs jst messed up😓😓
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The_Fallen_Writer
The_Fallen_WriterLv4

Bird_Of_Paradise:XD...it was my first try at writing ...and midway I felt demotivated🙈But comments like these helped me improve now and complete this novel . thank you for sticking till the end🙈Ly❤
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