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SonJason16
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2021-12-20 07:15

I read up till chapter 89 but after the first arc which was good it just gets boring. One thing that I hate is how dumb the MC is sometimes and he is limiting himself. He says he wants to stuggle so he gets the worst talent and body but all he does is just complain how slow he cultivates and compares himself to others.

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Jasonenrick
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thanks for the head ups. This Sounds super Stupid. I would give myself the most broken Body there is hahahaha

izuna
izunaLv14

Thanks you just saved me so much time I had started reading it when I felt it was going that way

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