the story is nice and very innovative i have not seen any novel that mc is energy so as the character design it is unique although as an orphan boy it should be much more antisocial instead of always trying to be with humans every time, the writing quality it is good, stability is one chapter a day and chapters a little short, the world should be a multiverse or omniverse so it should be quite vast even if at the moment it is only in a cultivation world and not much is known about the various levels of power right that there are people with various techniques, mc since he met humans history has taken a more boring turn especially when he abandoned a fish that quietly gave him endless energy just parasitizing him and shouldn't do anything because he can go to sleep, however for the moment there are only 37 chapters I hope the author continues because he seems to have a story with good potential even if for the mometo mc it is stupid I hope there is a growth of the character and character where he becomes more ruthless and intelligent because from what it seems after reincarnation even if he has all the memories mc seems to have become like a white piece that has to learn new things to grow
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LIKEI hope I have given an idea of the novel for those who want some advice, my comment is purely constructive and I sincerely hope that the author continues
i mean story would be kinda bland if he would stay in that fish for like 100 chaps :/
That is true. But he could have done a time skip of how he got the max energy he can absorb from the fish. Then leave.
Won’t Ben bland at all cause he could have a timeskip next chapter also when mc looses consciousness it’s as if he wakes up in a sec so it won’t have changed nothing
