Hello, Author here. This is a story I started on a whim for WPC #192 and somehow won bronze. The first 20 or so chapters are just me searching for directions I should be taking this novel to. So, many ideas that pop up there don't last for long. Especially, the dual personality. However, the world I build up during these times is not random. Also, please do not expect the MC to be a genius or something, and just enjoy what he does.
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LIKEYour forgetting he has a system with basically all the knowledge in the universe. If he wanted to and found a girl he really liked he could buy her an immortal cultivation manual. It’s not like there are no other immortals in the universe. All he has to do is save points
Great story so far. When reading I thought that since a lot of items are very expensive, there should be an unlock for a lottery system in the shop. A quest system might be cool too, but I wouldn’t want you to mess with the formula too much since the balance is pretty good right now.
The novel starts promising ..sure some parts are annoying like the price of everything he buys from the system is ridiculously high and is tiered for no reason but at least it's original .then things start going downhill with an mc that has the brain power of a 8 year old and the patience of a 3 yeah old...and now the novel is turning into another cliche with the mc joining some random sect ...such a shame..it has great potential