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Snoring_Panda
Snoring_PandaAuthor3yr
2021-07-22 13:35

Hello, Author here. This is a story I started on a whim for WPC #192 and somehow won bronze. The first 20 or so chapters are just me searching for directions I should be taking this novel to. So, many ideas that pop up there don't last for long. Especially, the dual personality. However, the world I build up during these times is not random. Also, please do not expect the MC to be a genius or something, and just enjoy what he does.

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Circlethatone
CirclethatoneLv15

As long as he doesn't ever truly become a human again then you will probably retain a lot of readers 😊♥

Kyorkuna
KyorkunaLv14

I love this book already author sama i binge read it all in 1 and a hAlf hours i will definantly support for more Chapters

Targaryen99
Targaryen99Lv1

Not a genius is doable, just don't make him dumb.

Llama_Llama7
Llama_Llama7Lv13

don't drop this is one of best novels I've read so far i love it

MarkkoYusek
MarkkoYusekLv2

there is romance? it will be harem?

Muhammad_Usama1
Muhammad_Usama1Lv3

i hope there is none. I am alreday tired of good novels ruined due to mcs chasing after skirts.

MarkkoYusek:there is romance? it will be harem?
Chaosdragon
ChaosdragonLv2

I hope there’s no harem tbh idm one fml in the end but no harem. Could you let us know what your thinking author.

HellsGate
HellsGateLv14

Idk he's a sentient energy... thing? being? and will live forever so unless fml can also live forever he's probably gonna have a few flings.

Chaosdragon:I hope there’s no harem tbh idm one fml in the end but no harem. Could you let us know what your thinking author.
Chaosdragon
ChaosdragonLv2

Your forgetting he has a system with basically all the knowledge in the universe. If he wanted to and found a girl he really liked he could buy her an immortal cultivation manual. It’s not like there are no other immortals in the universe. All he has to do is save points

HellsGate:Idk he's a sentient energy... thing? being? and will live forever so unless fml can also live forever he's probably gonna have a few flings.
Objectively_Wrong
Objectively_WrongLv4

Wait a minute, isn’t this the cover for God of Fishing on Novelupdates?

Bidhan_Achhami
Bidhan_AchhamiLv4

Whoa dude your from nepal as well!?

Snoring_Panda
Snoring_PandaAuthor

Yeah

Bidhan_Achhami:Whoa dude your from nepal as well!?
Daoist_Little_Yun
Daoist_Little_YunLv13

Kevin_Middleton
Kevin_MiddletonLv2

Great story so far. When reading I thought that since a lot of items are very expensive, there should be an unlock for a lottery system in the shop. A quest system might be cool too, but I wouldn’t want you to mess with the formula too much since the balance is pretty good right now.

Gamer_Boy_2840
Gamer_Boy_2840Lv4

The novel starts promising ..sure some parts are annoying like the price of everything he buys from the system is ridiculously high and is tiered for no reason but at least it's original .then things start going downhill with an mc that has the brain power of a 8 year old and the patience of a 3 yeah old...and now the novel is turning into another cliche with the mc joining some random sect ...such a shame..it has great potential

21man
21manLv15

does he go back to the village or not

Aaliyah_Stark_
Aaliyah_Stark_Lv3

😄

ron345
ron345Lv1

are u nepali?

Snoring_Panda
Snoring_PandaAuthor

yes

ron345:are u nepali?
a_commoner
a_commonerLv5

Bro, the synopsis is random and boring, try putting some effort there, you're letting a lot of potential readers escape. I don't know if your novel is good or bad, but the synopsis gave me no motivation to try it.

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Snoring_Panda
Snoring_PandaAuthor

This is my review after more than a year of writing this book. I will start by saying that this is not my best work, but one that is very fun to write, and from the comments I receive, it is quite fun to read as well. This is not an action-packed story with very high tension and suspense, so don’t expect that. It is more than anything a Slice of life. This is a story about a man who turned into energy and can no longer die. As a result, he goes around the world, the galaxies, and eventually the multiverse to see new things and visit new places. You will see all types of power systems, all types of stories, not just Eastern Fantasy as I idiotically put it up as. There’s cultivation, magic, summoning, space adventure, and will be many more things. In addition, I wish to answer a few questions and clear some confusion/ hatred. Q. Why did you turn him into a Human? That beats the premise of the story being about a Non-human MC. A. I didn’t turn him into a human, he was always meant to be one. I never intended to write a non-human MC to begin with when the idea first popped into my head. Still, in a sense, he’s still not a human and never will be. ****** Q. Why is the MC dumb/ not intelligent? A. When I started, I didn’t even know how to write a mediocre MC, let alone one with a brain. So I decided to go with an easy choice that will let me do some exposition without making it an info dump. So, basically, it was because I wasn’t very good at writing in general. ***** Q. Why are the first 100 or so chapters bad? A. When I started writing the book, I had 0 hope of continuing it. I was already writing another book I had started just a month ago, so I didn’t pay much attention to it. I gave this book maybe an hour at most to simply write a chapter and no other time to think of the plot. As a result, the first 100 chapters are some of the worst chapters I have ever written. I only started caring because it ended up being quite a bit popular amongst the readers. ***** Q. Why does the MC not jump in a volcano and sleep for a million years? A. I get this question a lot, even though it is explained. He cannot just sleep forever. There is a high chance of losing energy instead of gaining it when he sleeps. Besides, he likes meeting new people and seeing the world. ****** Q. Why does the MC care about humans? A. Why not? He was a human too, and in some way, he still is one. If you are looking for a cold MC, or anti-hero MC, this is not it. Just because he’s an immortal, he isn’t immediately apathetic to everything around him. ***** I hope you can read past the first 100 chapters, and maybe even enjoy them. If you cannot, that’s understandable as well. Thank you for reading the book either way.

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