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THE_GUY
THE_GUYLv43yr
2021-08-20 08:34

This is a good story among so many trash webnovels. While people will think in the first chapters why the MC doesn't Just sleep until he becomes OP,it will be explained later. The MC doesn't want to be OP without doing nothing. Just think about it,how boring your life would be if you were OP (Just like Saitama)? You wouldn't feel ALIVE and the MC Is Immortal,so... This is a new world with many new things to see and we know that there is a Universe and Multiverse to explore. I hope in 200-300 chapters we Will be in another Planet and It would be cool if the MC creates an army throughout the Universe with the groups of people he helped because it would be like a Family and the MC won't feel alone

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a_random_trio
a_random_trioLv3

yeah but saitama wouldn't be alive if he didn't have his power he'd just be like any hopeless civilian that will die by any random tiger level monster that attacks the city

Poet_Legion
Poet_LegionLv15

I mean I personally don't agree with you for the sole reason that if I was able to become an all-powerful being without feeling the time in between I would simply find ways to entertain myself afterwards by learning of everything there is to learn, because no matter how all-powerful you are you will not automatically become all-knowing as well. and if you don't have to struggle up the ranks of power then you don't have to sit there and be killed needlessly and setback when you're immortal. To me it would make so much more sense just to become all-powerful and then from there slowly explore your abilities and have fun with it because that's what I would do but then again in the story so far the main characters a complete idiot who doesn't know how to think his problems through

DaoistEWhaKq
DaoistEWhaKqLv3

I understand what you mean, but you don't get an idea of ​​how difficult it would be to write a story of that style, think about it, the world, the characters and the MC himself must be well constructed, because if it weren't that way it would be another junk novel.

Poet_Legion:I mean I personally don't agree with you for the sole reason that if I was able to become an all-powerful being without feeling the time in between I would simply find ways to entertain myself afterwards by learning of everything there is to learn, because no matter how all-powerful you are you will not automatically become all-knowing as well. and if you don't have to struggle up the ranks of power then you don't have to sit there and be killed needlessly and setback when you're immortal. To me it would make so much more sense just to become all-powerful and then from there slowly explore your abilities and have fun with it because that's what I would do but then again in the story so far the main characters a complete idiot who doesn't know how to think his problems through
WestFox
WestFoxLv1

A Family of very different creatures scattered throughout the universe. When such a force comes together, the sky will shake, the earth will split, and readers will faint because of the gigantic amount of epicness... Imagine how much fun this Family would be for them to play Monopoly : ) I would implement this in one of my future novels with great pleasure.

Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

this Novel is garbage ...so there's that ;)

DaoistEWhaKq:I understand what you mean, but you don't get an idea of ​​how difficult it would be to write a story of that style, think about it, the world, the characters and the MC himself must be well constructed, because if it weren't that way it would be another junk novel.
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Snoring_Panda
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This is my review after more than a year of writing this book. I will start by saying that this is not my best work, but one that is very fun to write, and from the comments I receive, it is quite fun to read as well. This is not an action-packed story with very high tension and suspense, so don’t expect that. It is more than anything a Slice of life. This is a story about a man who turned into energy and can no longer die. As a result, he goes around the world, the galaxies, and eventually the multiverse to see new things and visit new places. You will see all types of power systems, all types of stories, not just Eastern Fantasy as I idiotically put it up as. There’s cultivation, magic, summoning, space adventure, and will be many more things. In addition, I wish to answer a few questions and clear some confusion/ hatred. Q. Why did you turn him into a Human? That beats the premise of the story being about a Non-human MC. A. I didn’t turn him into a human, he was always meant to be one. I never intended to write a non-human MC to begin with when the idea first popped into my head. Still, in a sense, he’s still not a human and never will be. ****** Q. Why is the MC dumb/ not intelligent? A. When I started, I didn’t even know how to write a mediocre MC, let alone one with a brain. So I decided to go with an easy choice that will let me do some exposition without making it an info dump. So, basically, it was because I wasn’t very good at writing in general. ***** Q. Why are the first 100 or so chapters bad? A. When I started writing the book, I had 0 hope of continuing it. I was already writing another book I had started just a month ago, so I didn’t pay much attention to it. I gave this book maybe an hour at most to simply write a chapter and no other time to think of the plot. As a result, the first 100 chapters are some of the worst chapters I have ever written. I only started caring because it ended up being quite a bit popular amongst the readers. ***** Q. Why does the MC not jump in a volcano and sleep for a million years? A. I get this question a lot, even though it is explained. He cannot just sleep forever. There is a high chance of losing energy instead of gaining it when he sleeps. Besides, he likes meeting new people and seeing the world. ****** Q. Why does the MC care about humans? A. Why not? He was a human too, and in some way, he still is one. If you are looking for a cold MC, or anti-hero MC, this is not it. Just because he’s an immortal, he isn’t immediately apathetic to everything around him. ***** I hope you can read past the first 100 chapters, and maybe even enjoy them. If you cannot, that’s understandable as well. Thank you for reading the book either way.

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